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MichaelHameister33 added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013. MichaelHameister33 made 20 other changes.
MichaelHameister33 added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
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INT. int: dining room - morning
MichaelHameister33 inserted a transition in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
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Dina looks at him
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
Jadon
Then we will try something else, please, please just try this.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
dina
But what if they don't? These are my last chance... what if they don't work?
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
Jadon
That won't happen Dina, these will help you get better.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
dina
I've heard stories. People taking pills, suddenly they're a zombie with no emotions, I don't want that to happen to me.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
Jadon
Afraid of what?
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
dina
I'm afraid
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
jadon
Why won't you take the pills?
MichaelHameister33 inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
Dina is sitting on the couch, sad. Jadon walks in and sits next to her.
MichaelHameister33 inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
INT. int: living room - night
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
Jadon
You're sick, Dina. These pills will help you get better.
MichaelHameister33 inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
INT. int: dining room - afternoon
MichaelHameister33 inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
INT. int: bedroom - night
MichaelHameister33 inserted a transition in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
MichaelHameister33 deleted a transition in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
MichaelHameister33 inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
INT. int: room - afternoon
MichaelHameister33 inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/19/2013 [view]
INT. ext: backyard - day
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