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MichaelHameister33 inserted a shot in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013. MichaelHameister33 made 33 other changes.
MichaelHameister33 inserted a shot in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon (CONT'D)
What the hell Dina!? I just want you to get better. Sometimes I think you want to be sick. Well I'm done. Take your pills or I'll leave you, and I'll take the kids.
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dina
I'm afraid.
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dina
No.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
Take the pill
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Jadon takes the piece of paper.
MichaelHameister33 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
The psychologist hands Dina a piece of paper. Dina takes it, walks out of the room to Jadon. Jadon is now wearing glasses.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
Me either, but i'm glad I know now.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
Yeah, but I didn't even know you needed glasses.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
At the optometrists office across the street. Do you like them?
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Dina points to the glasses
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dina
Where did you get those?
MichaelHameister33 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
The psychologist hands Dina a piece of paper. Dina takes it, walks out of the room and hands it to Jadon. Jadon is now wearing glasses.
MichaelHameister33 inserted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
INT. int: doctors office - day
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Dina pushes away from Jadon
MichaelHameister33 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Dina pushes away from Jadon.
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Jadon hugs Dina, then pauses.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
No he wasn't... There's no one here.
MichaelHameister33 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Dina and Jadon are in bed sleeping. The man in the jeans and white mask (mask not seen) takes the doll off the dresser, Dina falls back asleep. A loud thump is heard. Dina get's out of bed, and walks down the stairs. She see's the man looking in the fridge. A light turns on, Dina turns around and see's Jadon.
MichaelHameister33 inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
I thought so too.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
My dad gave these to me, they are all I have to remember him by.
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Dina closes her eyes and takes a deep breath she continues to adjust the doll.
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Dina walks off screen.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
What they are.
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dina
Oh please, she wanted to have that heart attack. She couldn't stand the thought of living on the same earth as the kids.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
You know, It's a shame your mother never got to meet Leigh Ann and Leon, if just she lasted one more day.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
Too bad they didn't even know it was here. I can't believe she bought this two years ago but we never even knew.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
They really do. Your mom was right thinking this would make the kids come over here more.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
Jadon
They really like that trampoline.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
I'm sorry, I'm just a little distracted.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
He's always here... I can feel him in the room. I feel him when I do the laundry, when i'm watching the kids, when I wake up in the middle up the night, he's there, standing at the foot of my bed, watching me. At first I thought I was just imagining it. But now I know that he's real. He's real... and he never leaves.
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Jadon
Dina, what are you doing.
MichaelHameister33 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/20/2013 [view]
dina
He's always here... I can feel him in the room. I feel him when I do the laundry, when i'm watching the kids, when I wake up in the middle up the night, he's there, standing at the foot of my bed, watching me. At first I thought I was just imagining it. But now I know that he is real. He's real... and he never leaves.
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