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EXT. Car Crash Scene - Night

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(The song On my own - Benefeets. Song is playing during the car crash scene)

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Debris is scattered all over the gravel road. An interesting looking spider is crawling within the broken car parts. Police sirens can be heard. The spider exits the debris and slowly moves out o(The song On my own - Benefeets. Song is playing during the car crash scene) nto the road. Finally free, it stretches its legs. Everything is moving slower than normal; chaos. A young woman is lit up by flashing blue and red lights, her face streaked with tears. Her name is Alyssa. She is holding a man, Daniel. He is severely injured from a car crash. There are two other bodies that are visible, a little girl and a woman, but we only focus on Daniel. Daniel’s head is laying on Alyssa’s knees and she cradles it like a baby. Daniel looks up at her in pain, he is dying.

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Alyssa

Stay with me. Everything will be OK

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Daniel

My…. my... wife…. *bloody cough*

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Alyssa seems to be holding it together well. She takes no notice of the other victims of the car crash. We see Alyssa grab something out of her bag, it seems to be some kind of container. She holds it in front of her and closes her eyes making it seem like she is praying.

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(Over the shoulder transition)

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EXT. Graveyard - Day

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Alyssa is crouched down on her knees on freshly cut grass, and we see that she is at a graveyard. She reaches out and touches a gravestone. The name engraved is: Daniel. Alyssa is unable to find a tissue in her pockets or purse, so she wipes her nose and eyes with the white sleeve of her blouse. Alyssa is crying, her tears leaving mascara streaks down her cheeks. She's is looking over Daniel’s grave. His is the only grave in this row.

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Slowly, she stands with a very small smile and raises a small plastic tupperware-style container from her purse. In a quick motion, she opens the small container and captures a quick gulp of air with it then, “click, click”, she closes it.

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With wind blowing rapidly and leaves flying past Alyssa’s face, she closes her eyes. Without any hesitation or fear, Alyssa takes a deep breath and begins to whisper a phrase of words. With the environment rapidly changing around her, storm clouds beginning to flash with thunder and lightning in the background, her eyes become a portrait of what seems to be a flashback.

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EXT. REDWOODS Mountain Biking - Day

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Flashes of fast movement occurs. Zooming past, Alyssa can be seen biking hard. Not far behind we see Daniel. Alyssa is riding a little faster than Daniel and slightly more aggressively. Daniel is having more fun cutting and weaving around trees and shrubs and performing crazy tricks. It now becomes apparent that this is a race.

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Alyssa takes a quick look back and notices a warp, and the the environment changes form for a second. It is only a glimpse, but it is enough for her to look around. As Alyssa takes ahead, she notices to the left of her a little girl in the bushes with pitch black eyes wearing a white and dress with blue ribbon. Just behind the little girl is a silhouette of a woman standing behind her. This begins to freak Alyssa out. She only sees her for a second and as the next tree goes by; the little girl disappears.

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At that moment Daniel passes her. Alyssa takes a moment for herself and gets back into the race. In an epic comeback, Alyssa draws closer to Daniel. With Alysa’s aggressive riding she begins to streamline Daniel, copying every move he makes. He realises this so he just smiles.

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Alyssa

Babe, theres a spider on your back!

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Daniel

Hahaha, that's not going to work on me!

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Daniel turns back to have a look, and now the spider has climbed up onto his shoulder. In a frantic scream he starters to swerve from side to side. Alyssa is now next to Daniel, Daniel gets so distracted by the spider he hits a tree.

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At the bottom of the Redwoods Daniel finally catches up to Alyssa. She opens a fresh tupperware capturing the moment. As the tupperware clips shut Alyssa begins to whisper the same phrase of words as she did at the graveyard. Daniel begins to load the car with the bikes as if Alyssa wasn't even there. With distortions to the environment we see unusual behaviour from the wind and trees, as if they are communicating with Alyssa.

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INT. House Rotoiti - Day

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ALYSSA puts away her captured moment in her secret and locked cupboard. There are thousands, all of which are marked with a location and the name Daniel. All of the containers look special with magical elements to them all. Some have floating water, others captured tornadoes, etc.

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Daniel

Why would you save that one?

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Alyssa

Well why wouldn’t i?

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Daniel

You have to just rub it in.

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Alyssa

Well im sure you would do the same if you were in my shoes :p

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Although Daniel knows there are a lot of containers in the cupboard he has never really had a good look at them. He has a sneaking peek and one container stands out from the others; it looks like a captured spiderweb. The magical glow of it is magnificient. It captures his eye and he tries to grab it, but Alyssa stops him by shutting the cupboard door on him.

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cuts to black

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INT. House (Lounge) Lake Rotoiti - Night

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It is a warm night, blue skies and the stars are out reflecting off the lake. Dinner has just finished and Alyssa starts to clean up the kitchen. She sees the radio and decides to turn it on. (The song On my own - Benefeets)

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Alyssa

mmmm love this song. This reminds me of the night we first meet. Dance with me baby.

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Alyssa gets Daniel to start dancing with her, lost in the music and the moment, ALYSSA begins to drift off into some kind of graceful trance. She thinks about the time they meet. A lot of nostalgic imagery floats past. It starts off all pretty and happy, then suddenly dark memories arise. Images of Daniel’s grave stone flicker up, the car crash as well as a spider staring straight at her.

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(Her self absorption means Daniel has the chance to fade.) After what seems to be a few seconds, ALYSSA wakes up to sees the entire room covered in spider webs. She closes her eyes and and sees Daniel standing outside at the end of the jetty (approximately 30 meters away), she starts freaking out. In a frantic effort to return to her lover she rushes for the front door. When she opens it; Daniel is standing right on the other side of the door. We don't know how he got there so fast but Alyssa just accepts it, like she expected him to just be there. Alyssa takes in a deep breathe of relief. Alyssa grips Daniel as though she had lost him forever.

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We see the little girl with black eyes watch Daniel and Alyssa as she slowly walks along the jetty with the figure of another woman behind her. When we finally see the womans face, it looks just like Alyssa, but with black eyes. Alyssa and Daniel re-enter the house.

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Cut to Black.

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INT. House (Lounge) Lake Rotoiti - Day

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After waking up in bed by herself, Alyssa gets up to find Daniel staring into the cupboard at the hundreds of containers stored inside. He wears a distressed and confused look on his face as he holds one container in particular. “Daniels Grave” is written on the front.

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Daniel

What is this?

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Alyssa

You were not suppose to see that container I told you not to go snooping through my stuff

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Daniel

Are you kidding me, why the fuck is there a container that says my grave on it? ………….

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As Daniel verbally attacks Alyssa, the sound of the argument is drowned out by the sound of drones and ambient sounds.

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Alyssa takes the attack to heart, something inside her crumbling. Daniel opens up the tupperware, immediately inducing a flash to his grave site, but this time there are two other headstones on either side of his. He also sees tiny glimpses of the crash sight, and the vision ends with the little girl and Alyssa dead on the road.

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Little hands closing the tupperware container to stop the vision. We see Alyssa in utter distress now collapsing to the floor. As Alyssa looks up we see Daniel is holding hands with the girl with black eyes and ALYSSA knows who this is. It is causing her to breakdown out of mental and physical exhaustion. Alyssa pleads with the little girl, but there is no remorse. Supernatural powers cause the hundreds of tupperware containers explode into the air, they crash around the place ruthlessly and break all over Alyssa. With all the magical containers being opened it is utter chaos, wind blowing, rain hailing down and destruction inside the house. Alyssa, Daniel and the little girl disappears and all we see is a Black spider damaged on the floor.

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Cut to Black

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EXT. Car Crash Scene - Night

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(The song On my own - Benefeets. Song is playing during the car crash scene)

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Transition back to the starting scene, it is night, a severe car crash has happened and we see Alyssa dead on the road. We see a Spider crawling up Alyssas arm. The spider is more than just a spider it seems to have taken the form of Alyssa. Slumped on the floor, Daniel now in her arms, in the same bloodied state as before. Tears stream down her face as she watches Daniel looking up at her. By this stage sirens are loud and the colours blue and red paint Alyssa’s face.

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Alyssa

Stay with me. Everything will be O.K

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Daniel

My wife…..*bloody cough* …..

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Daniel (CONT'D)

Save our daughter, save them..

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These are the last words that DANIEL speaks. With medics rushing to her aid she puts a fake cry on and at this moment Alyssa pulls out a tupperware container. “Click, click”. She has a dark look on her face as she captures this moment with a tupperware container. She begins to chant.

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Alyssa

With life come death, death brings spirits, with my web i can capture the memories, Live and be free of this cursed Illusion, tricks and deceit i will succeed.

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The camera pulls out to show the dead daughter (in a white and blue ribbon dress) and his wife next to him. ALYSSA is not DANIELs wife. Alyssa is the spirit of the spider, she takes the form of anything. As Alyssa sits there a man walks past her and obscures her face for a second, once he clears past Alyssa has changed form into Daniel. Two more spiders crawl over Daniels face. The environment begins to shake and wind begins to pick up. The earth begins to warp and the spiders jump at the screen with a hsssss.

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THE END

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