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ext. bus stop - afternoon

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17 year old JOHN and his best friend EVAN get off the bus and start to walk home.

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EVAN

hey dude do you want to come over and play video games today? i spent all night last night leveling up and i finally think i can beat you

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EVAN chuckles after he says this.

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JOHN

no i cant today dude, my mom wants me to go to the store with her plus i have a bunch of homework. But i doubt you would be able to beat me even if i did come over.

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After this little discussion they do their handshake and they walk home. On his way home JOHN see's some new graffiti on the apartment building he lives in and takes a picture of it. JOHN opens the door to the apartment building and walks up 2 flights of stairs to his room. he opens the door and walks in.

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int. John's apartment - afternoon

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JOHN

Hey mom im home.

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JOHNS MOM

Hi honey, how was your day?

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JOHN

(as he walks into his room) It was okay.

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As JOHN opens the door to his bedroom we see walls full or pictures he has taken and artwork done by him. his bed is in the corner of his room and it is messy and poorly made. next to his bed is a small dresser and closet, and across from the bed there is a small desk with a little lamp and on the desk is a bunch of paper. with a printer and laptop.

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JOHN (CONT'D)

(To himself) Hmmm? i wonder where i am going to put this picture.

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JOHN walks over to the computer and plugs in his phone to upload the picture and print it. after it prints he walks over to an empty spot above his bead and tapes it to his wall.

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MOTHER

(Knocks on JOHN'S door) Honey ill be back soon im going to the store to get stuff for dinner. we are having spaghetti.

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JOHN

okay, wake me up when you get back im going to take a nap

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JOHN'S Mother leaves their apartment. and JOHN lays down on his bed and goes to sleep

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MOTHER

(stumbling through apartment door) John I need your help with the groceries!

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JOHN

(slowly walking out of his bedroom and rubbing his eyes) Okay im here.

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JOHN grabs the rest of the groceries that are waiting outside the door and takes them into the kitchen where his mom is un packing them.

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Mother

thank you sweetie

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Mother (CONT'D)

Hey Jeff should be home any minute and he said he had a bad day so please try and stay out of his way.

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Just as JOHN's MOTHER says this the door slams open and JEFF walks in. JEFF walks into the kitchen where everyone is he has a cig in his mouth

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JEFF

(grabbing her butt)Hey baby!

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JEFF stops hugging JOHN's MOTHER and get is JOHNS face

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JEFF

(flicks his cig at JOHN)hey kid no one was talking to you. Now get me a beer and go to your room. Me and your mom have some business to handle.

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JOHN goes to the fridge and get JEFF a beer and then starts walking to his room. He sits down at the desk gets out his homework and puts in headphones.

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JOHn

(biting his pencil eraser) Ugh i hate Math.

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JOHN does a few Math problems and then get up to go to the bathroom.

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JOHN (CONT'D)

What the hell was that?

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JOHN walks up to his MOTHER's door and opens it a little bit and see's glass on the floor. He opens it a litle bit more and see's his MOTHER in the corner away from JEFF.

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MOTHER

(tears coming down her cheeks)Honey dont come in here please.

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JEFF

didnt you hear your mom kid. she said dont come in here. this is why i never liked you. you dont listen.

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JOHN opens the door more and then JEFF turns and faces him. then runs at him and shoves him against the wall.

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JEFF (CONT'D)

(in JOHN's face) GET OUT!

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JEFF lets go of JOHN and then starts walking toward JOHN's MOTHER again. But JOHN interferes.

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JOHN

(shoving JEFF as hard as he can) HEY LEAVER HER ALONE!

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JEFF

HAHAHAHAHA!

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JEFF walks back up to john and punches him in the gut so hard blood comes out of his mouth. then he pushes him on the floor.

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MOTHER

(starts to cry) JOHN!

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JOHN

(lying on the ground coughing)

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JEFF walks back over to JOHN's MOTHER and picks her up and tries to kiss her but she didnt let him. She shoves him off of her but he slaps her and he falls to the ground.

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JOHN gets back up and slowly walks over to JEFF and tries to fight back but JEFF punches him again and he falls to the floor. JEFF picks up JOHN's MOTHER again and she starts to fight back.

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MOTHER

(crying) please stop, im sorry

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JOHN slowly starts to get up and he picks up a piece of glass on the ground next to him and stabs it as far into JEFF's back as he could. JEFF staggers and falls to the ground.

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JOHN

(Coughing)Mom come on!

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JOHN runs over to her mom and helps her up. as they both run out of the bedroom JOHN turns around and locks it, then sits his mother on the couch. he runs to a phone and dials 911. JOHN runs back to his mom with some water and a cloth to wipe off the blood on her face.

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