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PenelopeOhlin23 edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. PenelopeOhlin23 made 9 other changes. more
Astrid's back is toward the camera. She is walking down the middle of the sidewalk seen at the beginning. As she walks, she is silent. As time goes by, a shadow of a girl sits on benches she passes, and by the doorways of houses.
PenelopeOhlin23 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
Astrid
(turning around to face the girl)
I honestly thought I was dead. I was hoping that I was. That instead of you disappearing, I had actually pulled that trigger. I thought that I was in bliss, and that my shower was some sort of heaven. You were gone forever and the feeling of warmth washing over me was just me travelling into the afterlife.
PenelopeOhlin23 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. PenelopeOhlin23 made 11 other changes. more
Astrid
(turning around to face the girl)
I honestly thought I was dead. I was hoping that I was. That instead of you disappearing, I had actually pulled that trigger.
PenelopeOhlin23 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
Astrid sits her r
PenelopeOhlin23 added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. PenelopeOhlin23 made 2 other changes. more
There is only silence. Astrid pulls the gun away from her head, opening her eyes. Tears are streaming down her face, and she looks toward the door. The girl is gone.
 

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