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976tc6 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/02/2014. 976tc6 made 24 other changes.
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Jake has his book in hand. He looks right at the girls and walks calmly into the library.
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INT. ext. library - morning
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Jake looks shocked as Siren 2 knocks over a vase. He slowly makes his way out of the party shaking his head.
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Siren 1 goes into the other room and begins dancing by herself.
976tc6 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/02/2014 [view]
siren 2
You're not the boss of me!
976tc6 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/02/2014 [view]
Siren 1
I'm going to a dance party. Wanna come?
976tc6 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/02/2014 [view]
All of the seniors are at a crazy party. Jake walks in and sees the girls. They have drinks in their hands and are standing on a table.
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INT. int. party - night
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Jake tries one last time to return the book. He doesn't see the girls at first so he smiles. He begins walking toward the door, triumphant. Then two steps from the entrance, the girls burst out of the library laughing. He loses his train of thought and forgets where he is again. He stumbles away looking confused.
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INT. ext. library - afternoon
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Jake goes on the computer and checks his email. He has an email from the angry librarian. She tells him he will not graduate unless he returns his overdue materials.
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INT. int. house - morning
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Jake's mom's words echo in his head. He tries to run toward the door this time. He spots them and drops the book once again.
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INT. ext. library - morning
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Jake's mom leaves the room and Jake falls onto his bed.
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jake's mom
Jake I don't understand the problem. You must turn in the book tomorrow or else.
976tc6 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/02/2014 [view]
Jake listens to more angry voicemails from the library. His mother comes into his room.
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INT. int. house - afternoon
976tc6 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/02/2014 [view]
We can see the whole track team around the track. Jake is in his uniform stretching in the corner. He lines up at the starting line and the gun goes off. Jake is in the lead for the whole race, but the girls walk onto the track at the last turn. Jake spots them and slows down, staring. He loses his lead and someone else wins.
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INT. ext. track - afternoon
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Jake stands outside the library determined to enter. He starts walking toward the doors, but spots the girls when he is halfway there. His mind goes blank and the staring begins. He fails to enter the library once again.
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INT. ext. library - morning
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