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976tc6 deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/10/2014. 976tc6 made 28 other changes.
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Siren 1
I'm going to a dance party. Wanna come?
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siren 2
You're not the boss of me!
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Jake's mom leaves the room and Jake falls onto his bed.
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Jake sees more angry emails from the library. Jake falls onto his bed.
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jake's mom
Jake I don't understand the problem. You must turn in the book tomorrow or else.
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Jake sees more angry emails from the library. His mother comes into his room.
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Jake nods.
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TITLE: You must return the book now or you are grounded for a week.
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Jake
Okay mom. I'm sorry. I'm trying my best.
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JAKE'S MOM
Jake you have to return your book today or you are grounded for a week.
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Jake looks at a girl laughing with her friends and then glances down at his poster. He starts making his way toward her. The girls from the library step in front of him. He can't stop staring as they walk away and he drops his poster. Crowds of people step on the poster and the girl walks away. Jake's phone rings. It's JAKE'S MOM. We see a split screen.
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Jake jumps when he sees the message and then sighs. He makes a note in his planner to visit the library the next day.
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Librarian on phone
This is the librarian calling for Jake Heber. The book the Odyssey is two weeks overdue. You must return these overdue materials immediately!
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Jake walks in drops his backpack in his kitchen. He grabs a bag of chips and walk toward the computer. He sees an email from the library. The librarian tells him he must return the Odyssey immediately.
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TITLE: Can you tell me where the library is?
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Jake
Can any of you tell me where the library is?
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Brad walks off toward the gate and Jake starts trying to fight upstream through the crowds of people.
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Jake looks alarmed at the teacher's proclamation and jumps when the bell rings. He glances at the materials list again and starts walking out of class with his friend, BRAD. Brad beckons Jake toward the tables, but Jake holds up the material list. Brad nods and walks off. Jake continues to the library.
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brad
Sounds good see you later.
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Jake
I better go check out this book first thing. I always forget stuff like this.
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Jake looks alarmed at the teacher's proclamation and jumps when the bell rings. He glances at the materials list again and starts walking out of class with his friend, BRAD
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Brad
Hey man what are you up to at lunch?
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TITLE: Wake up people this isn't middle school anymore! You're first assignment is to get the Odyssey from the library by next class.
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Teacher
Wake up people this isn't middle school anymore! This class will require three hours of homework every night and beware i love handing out F's. Your first assignment is to check out the Odyssey from the library by nest class.
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Jake listens to the exchange and continues to class.
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Jake looks lost and overwhelmed as he makes his way to his first class. All around him crowds of people swarm past him. Two friends wave at him on his way to class.
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Random boy 1
Hey! How was your summer?
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random girl 1
Perfect!
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