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erinthegeek added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009. erinthegeek made 53 other changes.
erinthegeek added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Blackout.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
Don't worry about it, son. It's only a stupid test...it means nothing in the long run...besides I put your name on my test anyway. You're welcome.
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Mr. Cooper
Woo! Piece of cake! Oh man! How'd you do, son? How'd it go?
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Mr. Cooper and Ben get up, gather their belongings, and start to head out of the classroom. Mr. Cooper hands Ben a PowerBar and pats him on the back.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
Terrible! And you know Dad, programming that calculator to read, "That's my boy!" and "Kick the SAT's ass, Ben!" really didn't help with the algebra section!
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben and Mr. Cooper both continue working on their tests for awhile longer. Ben is looking utterly confused while Mr. Cooper breezes through the section quickly and throws his pencil down in victory.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
Woo! Oh man! How'd you do, son? How'd it go?
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
(loud whisper)
Dad, please! Just let me finish!
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Mr. Cooper (cont'd)
(straining to reach across the aisle)
Here...it'll really help...I just put in new batteries...
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teacher in charge (O.S.)
Pencils down please!
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Mr. Cooper
YEAH!
erinthegeek added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben and Mr. Cooper both continue working on their tests for awhile longer. Mr. Cooper breezes through the section quickly and throws his pencil down in victory.
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
(loud whisper)
Dad, please! Just let me finish this!
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
(whispering)
Dad! I know you think you're helping, but seriously, be quiet! You're going to get us both kicked out!
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper (cont'd)
(loud whisper)
Y'know, son...take it from your old man, make sure you really fill in those bubbles...really press hard, gotta make sure the machine picks it up.
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Mr. Cooper
Sure it is! This is a milestone in your young life, I gotta look out for my boy! Besides, if I wasn't here who would keep you hydrated, huh?
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ben
Yeah, but I don't think the SAT is really a father-son activity...
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
(whispers)
Alright...okay, fine, fine.
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper focuses back on his test for a second, obviously not working on it. Suddenly, a flash goes off and the sound of a camera shutter is heard.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
(loud whisper)
Dad, please! Just let me finish this! Why don't you focus on YOUR test?
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
teacher in charge (O.S.)
Eyes on your own papers!
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
(loud whisper)
I promised your mother I'd document this!
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
(loud whisper)
DAD! What the hell?
erinthegeek added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper focuses back on his test for a second, obviously not working on it. Suddenly, a flash goes off and the sound of a camera shutter goes off.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
(whispers)
Sorry, sorry...
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
Dad! I know you think you're helping, but seriously, be quiet! You're going to get us both kicked out!
erinthegeek added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Students are beginning to get disrupted by the whispering as Mr. Cooper tries to inconspiculously hand Ben the calculator.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
(loud whisper)
Psst...Ben...math section? Here's a calculator. How did you not bring one? Didn't you listen to your mother?
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Mr. Cooper slides back and pretends to focus on his own test. He keeps sneaking a peek at Ben until he can't keep quiet.
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Mr. Cooper (cont'd)
(loud whisper)
Y'know son...make sure you really fill in those bubbles...really press hard, gotta make sure the machine picks it up.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
(loud whisper)
DAD! I know! Be quiet!
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper (cont'd)
(watches Ben fill in a few bubbles)
Y'know son...make sure you really fill in those bubbles...really press hard, gotta make sure the machine picks it up.
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
It is time to start the next portion of the test and the students open their booklets and get to work. Mr. Cooper slides his desk a little closer to Ben's.
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben catches the water and hesitantly drinks.
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
Sure it is! This is a milestone in your young life, I gotta be there for you, besides, if I wasn't here who would keep you hydrated, huh?
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
DAD is sitting at a desk, amongst high school students, front and center in a classroom that has "SAT TEST TODAY!" written on the chalkboard. He is well into his forties and is dressed in typical weekend "Dad" fashion (flannel shirt, kahki pants, work boots). On his desk is a calculator, multiple sharpened number two pencils and a PowerBar. He has a small cooler at his feet.
erinthegeek added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
It is time to start the next portion of the test and the students open their booklets and get to work. Mr. Cooper
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
And miss out on this special bonding time? I don't think so!
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
Yeah, I guess. But you didn't have to TAKE the test with me, you could have waited outside like the other parents.
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
MR. COOPER is sitting at a desk, amongst high school students, front and center in a classroom that has "SAT TEST TODAY!" written on the chalkboard. He is well into his forties and is dressed in typical weekend "Dad" fashion (flannel shirt, kahki pants, work boots). On his desk is a calculator, multiple sharpened number two pencils and a PowerBar. He has a small cooler at his feet.
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper takes a bottle of water from his cooler and tosses it to his son.
erinthegeek added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben
Yeah, I guess.
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Ben hesitantly takes the water and drinks.
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper (cont'd)
You gotta stay focused for the math portion, right?
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper takes a bottle of water from his cooler, unscrews the cap and hands it to his son.
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
Sure it is! If I wasn't here who would keep you hydrated, huh?
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
ben
Yeah, but I don't think the SAT's is really a father-son activity...
erinthegeek edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
MR. COOPER is sitting at a desk, amongst high school students, front and center in a classroom that has "SAT TEST TODAY!" written on the chalkboard. He is well into his fourties and is dressed in typical nerdy "Dad" fashion (nice pants, sweater vest). On his desk is a calculator, multiple sharpened number two pencils and a PowerBar. He has a small cooler at his feet.
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
Mr. Cooper
Sure it is!
erinthegeek edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/27/2009 [view]
ben
Yeah, but I don't think the SAT's is a good father-son activity..
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