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bloody wally

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Erin Magner

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int. walmart camping asile - Night

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DAD, MOM, EMILY and BILLY are sitting at a campsite. They have a brand new tent set up. Dad is dressed head to toe in brand new camping gear, the rest of the family is in regular clothes. They are sitting around a decorative fake fire where a fan keeps the fabric flame going, "roasting" marshmallows. They are telling ghost stories. Dad is holding a flashlight under his chin.

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billy

Dad, we're really too old for ghost stories.

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Emily

Yeah, besides, I don't think waiting around in the sporting goods aisle while our car gets fixed counts as camping anyway...

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dad

A long, long time ago...there was an old man named Bloody Wally...who worked in a Wal-Mart, much like this one...

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Mom, Emily, and Billy audibly sigh.

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dad (cont'd)

Now, Bloody Wally worked the night shift at this particular Wal-Mart and not many customers ever saw him...but they sure knew him.

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Emily whimpers and there is a rustling noise in the background.

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dad (cont'd) (CONT'D)

He worked deep in the stock room, tracking inventory late into the night...but he didn't just track inventory...he stole souls!

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The rustling continues.

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dad (cont'd)

One night, Johnny...the new stock boy ventured back there. And then...HE VANISHED!

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MOM, EMILY, BILLY

AAAAHHHH!!!

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Mom, Emily, and Billy scream as JANITOR appears. He is shining a flashlight at the family.

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janitor

Hey what's all the commotion back here? What do you think your doin?

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dad

Oh! Uh...nothing, sir. I'm just educating my family on your fine establishment here.

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janitor

(skeptical) Well, whatever you're doing, keep it down! And you better be paying for those marshmallows!

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Janitor leaves as Mom, Emily, and Billy, catch their breath.

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dad

Now, this Wal-Mart wasn't one of them fancy Super Wal-Marts with the groceries and the stereos and the guns...oh, no...but every time it got a new employee, like Johnny...they disappeared, never to be seen again. Customers started noticing that the store was getting...better somehow...sales were up...prices were dropping...the store was getting way cooler merchandise.

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billy

(scared but interested) Like when they started carrying XBOX games!!

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dad

They started to suspect it had something to do with all of the missing stock boys...but there was no proof. That is, until one night when the CEO, his wife and his son paid a visit to Bloody Wally's store. As soon as the son walked through the automatic doors he was in a trance-like state, walking blindly towards the stockroom's staff-only entrance.

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mom

BUT YOU CAN'T GO BACK THERE!!

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dad

The CEO and his wife tried to restrain the boy but couldn't. It wasn't until a sharp-eyed Greeter spotted Bloody Wally, who was luring the boy with shotty merchandise at discounted prices, and managed to shoot him straight in the hip with a silver bullet!

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emily

Wait, wait. I thought you said this wasn't a Super Wal-Mart. No guns.

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Dad

Honey...it was down south. I guess he had a gun he got at an NRA rally or something. Can I finish?? Okay, so...now that Bloody Wally was shot--

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billy

Shot dead!

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dad

Oh, no, no son. Not shot dead! Just paralyzed from the waist down. Wal-Mart didn't want any haunted lawsuits! Now, that Bloody Wally was shot and was destined to a life on disability for the foreseeable future, he cursed the store and it's employee's forever! The legend goes, that if anyone dare utter his favorite phrase three times inside a Wal-Mart store, Bloody Wally will curse you with high prices and inconvenience...forever!

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Mom starts weeping.

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billy

Well, wh-what was his favorite phrase?

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dad

Attention Wal-Mart shoppers...attention Wal-Mart shoppers...

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intercom (o/s)

Attention Wal-Mart shoppers...

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all

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

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Blackout.

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