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popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012. popesss made 83 other changes.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
Ashley
(to camera)
She's, like, really sick. Not cool.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
ashley
(to camera)
Negative calories?!
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
(confused/annoyed, to camera)
But we hate gym.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
(to camera)
Really?
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
(whispering to camera)
I just got my period and I don't feel so good.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
ashley
(to camera)
Wow! Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda sounds great!
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
(cheerfully)
Look at all the calories she's burning!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda! For the ungrateful brats in your life!
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Amber lunges at Ashley and Kelly and the girls running screaming out of the room.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
I WANT MY DADDY!!!!!
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Suddenly, Amber devolves into full-on raging zombie.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
ashley
Amber, what is going on with you?
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
I love my daddy.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
(flatly)
Where is my daddy? I want to go tell him I love him.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
I love my
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
Amber. You hate your dad. Remember how he cheated on your mom...?
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
(flatly)
Where is my father? I want to go tell him I love him.
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Amber stands, zombie-like.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o. (CONT'd)
- guaranteed to make all your troubles disappear!
popesss added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
Amber stops writhing and lies limply on the floor.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o. (CONT'd)
Not to worry! We've also included a mild sedative -
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
Ashley
She's, like, really sick. Not cool.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o. (CONT'd)
It's physically impossible to digest Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda, so your body burns calories by retching it up! You're going to be all ready for bikini season before you know it!
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Cut to Amber writhing violently on the floor.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
(cheerfully)
But look at all the calories she's burning?
popesss added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
Kelly and Ashley rush over to help Amber.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
What the hell?!
popesss added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
Amber takes a sip of the pink goop and immediately starts retching/vomiting.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
Sure-diddly-doodles!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
ashley
Negative calories?!
popesss added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
The girls are attentive again.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
(momentarily flustered)
Uh, well...when you drink Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda, you won't have to participate in gym anyway, because our soda has negative calories!
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
(confused/annoyed)
But we hate gym.
popesss inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
The girls look to be losing interest.
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
(momentarily flustered)
Uh, well...when you drink Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda, you won't have to participate in gym anyway, because our soda has negative calories
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
(confused/annoyed)
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
Yepperoonies! We've formulated our soda to contain prescription-strength doses of PMS medicine, so you'll never have to miss a gym class again!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
Really?
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
Have a glass of Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
amber
(whispering
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
ashley
Amber! What's wrong?
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Amber clutches her stomach in pain.
popesss edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
Now we won't be at risk for osteoporosis in our old age!
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v.o.
That's right!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
kelly
Now we won't be at risk for osteoporosis later on in life!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
v.o.
It sure is! Just one glass of Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda offers a full year's supply of calcium!
popesss added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
ashley
Wow! Dr. Ruth's Lady Soda sounds great!
popesss edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 04/16/2012 [view]
INT. int. - kitchen
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INT. graphics - molecules, dna, other science-y nonsense
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scientist #1
(in falsetto)
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