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The crew of the HMS Cardinal discovers a planet very similar to Earth. They scan the planet only to find that the technology is that of Earth in the 1780's. Not only is the technology similar, so are the events. A new country is emerging from another and the crew unknowingly help a revolution.

Project Type: Television (30 min)

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MusicMaster added dialogue in "Siege!" 7 months ago. MusicMaster made 4 other changes. more
Kole
Good idea.
MusicMaster added dialogue in "Siege!" 7 months ago. MusicMaster made 4 other changes. more
Kole
Jumped? I don't really want to do that again. Do you have a smaller ship? One that you can use to land. Without jumping.
Trissy added a comment to Star-ship Cardinal Episode 2: Revolution 7 months ago. more
This is really good and it is getting on well i am really enjoying it. Also do you mind checking out my other script, The Phantom Squadron and telling me what you think.
MusicMaster added an action in "Siege!" 7 months ago. MusicMaster made 2 other changes. more
The door to the jumper opens up with Kole and the team inside.
MusicMaster added an action in "Planning!" 7 months ago. MusicMaster made 16 other changes. more
All the militia leave the room. The team is launched back to the ship.
 

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