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Morbid story of a daughter and mother at a playground.

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

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renaye edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/18/2008. renaye made 7 other changes. more
The ragged young man FLED. Many people surrounded the scene. Someone went to ASK for help. The driver PANIC and his two hands PULLING his hair. Many other people STOOD there and LOOKED at the scene. The crowd INCREASED and became a little ROWDY ... No one NOTICED the little girl ... she was CRYING ... alone ... until FADE.
renaye edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 05/13/2008. more
DAUGHTER
Yay!! I want chocolate ice cream from Baskin Robbins!!
renaye edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/13/2008. more
They continued swinging for a while.
renaye edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 05/10/2008. renaye made 33 other changes. more
Mother and daughter walked to the ice-cream motorcyclist. Daughter got Paddle Pop bar. Motorcyclist was GIVING Mother change when there was a ragged young man CAME and SNATCHED the change. Mother FOUGHT and the man PUSHED her to the road. Coincidentally a car was SPEEDING on the road and HIT Mother. Blood spluttered on the ground...
renaye edited the outline. on 05/10/2008. more
 

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