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BrandonTrinh edited the scene titled "This is your first scene." on 08/12/2013. BrandonTrinh made 35 other changes.
BrandonTrinh edited the scene titled "This is your first scene." on 08/12/2013
BrandonTrinh edited the scene titled "This is your first scene." on 08/12/2013
BrandonTrinh edited the scene titled "This is your first scene." on 08/12/2013
BrandonTrinh inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/12/2013 [view]
Kim:
So tell me more about Dave's girlfriend.
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Ashley:
Ye... Yeah.
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KIM:
Maybe it was nothing
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Ashley:
Ugh.... Kim I don't own a dog remember?
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Kim:
Oh . . . right . . .
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Kim:
You know Ashley if you were supposed to live, at least one person would have come to save you.
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Silouhoute Looms in th
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ASHLEY:
If you don't go i'll tell everyone about your little prom night fiasco between you and Jeff.
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DAve:
It was..
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Ashley: (CONT'D)
OMG Dave you okay!? Who did this?
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DAVE takes a breath
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Ashley:
OMG Dave you okay!?
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THUD THUD THUD. It is coming from the room at the end of the hallway. Ashley heads tow
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THUD THUD THUD. It is coming from the room at the end of the hallway
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THUD THUD THUD.
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ASHLEY:
Kim?
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No response. ASHLEY heads towards her closet and picks up a baseball bat.
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No response.
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Ashley:
Kim? . . . Kim you okay?
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ASHLEY stairs over the couch. Eye level only. About 10 seconds later she hears a scream.
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KIM heads toward the stairs. She leaves the screen
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Kim:
Alright fine.
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ASHLEY stares kim down
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Kim:
Wait but....
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Ashley:
Alright Kim since this is my house I want you to go upstairs and check first.
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(BASE Thuds get louder)
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Kim:
Oh . . . right . . .
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Ashley:
Ugh.... Kim I don't own a dog remember?
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KIM:
Maybe it was your dog?
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THUD THUD . . . the girls exchange worried looks
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INT. InT.-Living Room-House-Nowhere near any parks
BrandonTrinh created this project! on 08/12/2013
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