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Quick pitch

This screenplay is about how a person can be his worse enemy and not even know it.

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

This project's owner would like a little help on parts of the project.

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liveforever joined the project! on 01/11/2009. more
Daredevilf4 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/25/2008. Daredevilf4 made 26 other changes. more
BELLA
You should take some aspirin.
Daredevilf4 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/13/2008. more
CULPA
I just want to tell you. You’re a dickless; fuckhead. You hear me!
Daredevilf4 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2008. Daredevilf4 made 44 other changes. more
CULPA IS SEEN BREAKING THE SEAL OF THE ASPRIN BOTTLE. HE THEN POURS OUT THE ENTIRE CONTENTS INTO THE TRASH-CAN. HE THEN BEGINS TO OPEN A BOTTLE OF CAFFEINE TABLETS. HE POURS THE CAFFEINE TABLETS INTO THE EMPTY ASPRIN BOTTLE. HE TAKE ONE WITH A GLASS OF WATER. HE PROCEEDS TP MAKE A PHONE CALL RANT. THE CAMERA DOLLYS OUT OF THE KICHEN THOUGH THE HALLWAY BACK TO THE BEDROOM. WE STOP AT CULPA'S CELL THAT VIBRATES WITH A NEW VOICE MAIL. WE PAN TO SEE CULPA GET IN BED BETWEEN HIS SHEETS. END
Daredevilf4 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2008. Daredevilf4 made 24 other changes. more
CULPA
His employment doesn't concern me.
 

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