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Proof. Last edited by Deformed_Fax, on 10/27/2013. 0 comments. More scene info.

scene 5 - staircase of building - afternoon

Deformed_Fax - on 10/26/2013

The young man walks out of the bathroom to the stairs. He looks over his shoulder, at first to be sure she isn't following him. Then he comes to a stop and turns around, looking at the bathroom. He rubs his hands on his face in a stressed manner. He walks over to the locker bays, as he turns the corner he tries to forget about the confrontation completely. The gothic teen is waiting in the locker bay for him. He is surprised to see her, but doesn't think she is real. He tries to ignore her.

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Gothic teen

You think you are too good for everyone? Is that what it is? If you were really that good then why do some of your friends hate you and deny knowing you.

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Young man

Shut up, you don't know me. You dpm

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He tries opening his locker again. She is leaned up against the locker obnoxiously right next to him. He fails in opening it but tries to act slick. He turns around...

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Young man (CONT'D)

Leave me alone.

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...and walks away from her, out of the locker bay. He walks towards the stairs again, she walks behind him. He begins walking up the stairs faster, trying not to notice her following him. He takes large steps skipping 2 stairs per step. She follows him normally, slowly. At the top of the stairs he stops and turns around to see her still trying to catch up. He looks around, turns to his left and walks towards what looks like an elevator. He shoves the button once or twice and peeks to see if she is walking towards him. The elevator opens. He walks in and hit '3'. The elevator doors open and he walks out, onto the roof of the building. He walks forward. Not at the edge of building but close enough. He sits down and sighs. She comes from behind a booth or wall at an angle he didn't see.

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Gothic teen (CONT'D)

Wow, It sure is nice. You're life must be a real luxury to live. You get to dry your hands with things that aren't yours and then just walk away without consequences. I wish I had it that way.

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He stands up and looks at her, she stands near the edge of the building and looks down.

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gothic teen (CONT'D)

Long drop eh?

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He looks at her and agrees, he takes off his jacket and places it on the ground about to sit on it. He itches his arm and looks at her. She spits over the edge and counts inaudibly how long it takes for the spit to hit the ground.

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Young man

Seriously, what do you want.

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Gothic teen

I want exactly what you want. I want you to jump..

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The young man looks at her, squinting his eyes. Considering yet questioning why she'd say that.

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gothic teen (CONT'D)

You think you're too good for people? Really? You are just a stupid teen. Haven't even graduated high-school. You don't even have a girlfriend do you?

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He tries to look away, not participate in his own bashing.

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Gothic teen

Are you a virgin? Have you even kissed a girl? No, correct? I'm right and we both know it. So what entitles you to believe you are better than the people in your life? Is it pride, is it ignorance? You think you are godly even though you haven't even kissed a girl? Come on kid, even I have kissed a girl.

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Young man

Ok, I understand. Now what do you want. Why are you following me?

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gothic teen

At first I was just hoping to make a friend in the bathroom. Maybe sell a t-shirt and earn an instagram follower in the process but now i've seen you are far to good to be kind to people. So if you think you are right, and you are better than everyone else, then jump. Prove to us your godly powers by surviving this fall. Hell, if you can walk away after you jump then you must be. Superhuman!

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The young man stands up. The girl is standing a few feet from the edge looking down at the ground. He walks up next to her but keeping his distance. He really considers it.

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Young man

I don't want to. Why should I have to prove anything to you. I won't jump. I'm confident i will survive but, why even try. Why even think of it.

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gothic teen

C'mon, just do it. It will be over before you know it. How about this, if you admit that you are wrong; you are not better than everyone, and you are sorry for being rude to me. Then I will be sure you survive the fall.

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young man

No, it's not worth it. Why even try.

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She begins to walk away as he is still standing there looking over the edge. Something in him tells him to jump, he remember the note. He hears his mother's voice in his head.

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He falls back on the roof, on his jacket away from the edge. He comprehends how close he was to jumping and killing himself. He stands up, picks up his jacket and puts his glasses on and begins to walk back to the elevator. He looks around wondering where she is. The elevator opens, he gets in. He presses '1' a few times as the elevator door shuts. Black screen.

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