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This is your first scene. Last edited by thatgirl, on 10/19/2013. 0 comments. More scene info.

6.49 am

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The shot zooms in on a digital alarm clock that goes off, the time reading 6.49. The wall behind it is pink and there are unlit fairy lights behind it. The shot is zoomed out slightly to reveal a girl lying in her bed. Only half of the bed is seen. The camera zooms in again to the alarm clock as it beeps.

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the second room

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same alarm clock, same time. There is a wall covered in band posters in the background, the shot zooms so that you see a girl waking up. She picks up her iphone to look for messages.

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the third room

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The shot cuts to a different iphone and you see a boy pick up the phone to turn the alarm on to snooze. he places it down on the stand beside his bed knocking the unused alarm clock, the same as the girls, slightly.

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the fourth room

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THE SHOT REVEALS AN EMPTY, UN-SLEPT IN BED AND ZOOMS IN TO THE BEEPING ALARM CLOCK, BESIDE IT IS A SCHOOL PHOTO OF A BOY.

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THE BOYS FACE IS FADES BACK INTO THE BOY IN THE FIRST GIRLS BEDROOM.

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the first room

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HE IS RUNNING AROUND TRYING TO GET CHANGED. THE GIRL SIGNALS HIM TO BE QUIET, THERE IS MUFFLED NOISES FROM THE NEXT ROOM. THE BOY OPENS THE WINDOW TO LEAVE BUT RUNS OVER TO THE GIRL QUICKLY, LIKE HE FORGOT SOMETHING IMPORTANT.

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DANNY:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY KATE

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HE SMILES, KISSING HER ON THE FOREHEAD. SHE BLUSHES SLIGHTLY AS HE RUNS BACK ACROSS THE ROOM TO HER WINDOW, SHE WHISPERS.

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KATE:

THANKS DANNY.

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HE JUMPS OUT THE WINDOW AND YOU HEAR A MUFFLED THUD AS HE HITS THE GROUND SAFELY. HER PARENTS WALK IN WITH A GIFT, SINGING HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

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the second room

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THE GIRL HAS PUT HER IPHONE DOWN AND STANDS UP, WALKING TO HER CALANDER. SHE PICKS UP A PEN AND CIRCLES THE SQUARE MARKED '16TH BIRTHDAY'. fROWNING TO HERSELF SHE REACHED ON TOP OF HER WARDROBE FOR A PICTURE OF HER PARENNTS. SHE SIGHS TO HERSELF.

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ELIZA:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ME.

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HER PHONE BLEEPS AND THE FOCUS GOES TO THE IPHONE,THE SHOT MOVES TO THE THIRD ROOM WHERE THE BOYS ALARM GOES OFF, ONCE AGAIN. HE GROANS AND THE SCENE TURNS TO A SHOT OF HIS DOOR. THE SCENE SHOWS BOTH SIDE OF THE WALL. oN ONE SIDE, LEANING AGAINST THE DOOR STANDS HIS DAD. oN THE OTHER IS THE BOY CURLED IN A BALL ON HIS BED AT THE SOUND OF HIS DADS KNOCK.

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DAD:

GET OUT OF BED NOW YOU LAZY SON OF A B*TCH MY BREAKFAST WONT MAKE ITSELF. WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? THINK YOU CAN JUST LAY IN BED ALL DAY? GET A GRIP SON. GET A GRIP. YOUR NOT GONNA MAKE SOMET'IN OF YOUR LIFE IF Y'UR LYING IN THERE ALL DAY! IF I DON'T SEE YOU OUT THIS DOOR IN TEN SECONDS I'M COMING IN. UNDERSTOOD?

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THE BOY SWALLOWS BACK HIS TEARS AND RUNS TOWARDS THE DOOR. HE TAKES A DEEP BREATH BEFORE OPENING IT.

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THE SHOT SWITCHES TO BEHIND WHERE THE BOY STANDS, YOU SEE THE BAcK OF THE BOY AND HIS DAD STANDING IN FRONT OF HIM.

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CHRIS:

UNDERSTOOD, SIR.

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DAD:

GOOD. THIS WON'T BE HAPPENING AGAIN THEN, WILL IT?

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CHRIS:

NO, SIR.

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DAD:

COS IT WILL MAKE ME MAD DAMN IT.

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CHRIS:

YES, SIR.

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HIS DAD LIGHTS A CIGARETTE AND THE SHOT SWITCHES SIDES TO FACE CHRIS AND IT FOLLOWS AS HE WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS. ON THE BOTTOM STEP HE LOOKS AT THE CIGARETTE BURN ON HIS ARM. THE SHOT FOLLOWS HIS GAZE AS HE SWITCHES FROM THE DOOR TO HIS ARM. CHRIS THEN GOES TO THE KITCHEN AND BEGINS TO MAKE BREAKFAST.

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THE SHOT RETURNS TO THE FOURTH ALARM CLOCK AND ZOOMS OUT SLIGHTLY TO SEE AN OPEN WINDOW. THE BOYS HEAD POPS UP AND HE CLIMBS THROUGH. GRABBING HIS BAG FROM THE SIDE OF THE DOOR HE LEAVES HIS ROOM AS HIS MOTHER SHOUTS.

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MOTHER:

HONEY, IS THAT YOU?

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DANNY:

YEAH MAH,

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