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This is your first scene. Last edited by LtLJack, on 09/10/2008. 0 comments. More scene info.

EXT. rich farm land — day

LtLJack - on 09/10/2008

The farm land is surrounded by a giant hedge, it goes all the way around the land in a box shape. on the land is a small area of houses made from stone. the people in the village are wearing a large toga in white, some are wearing purple others are wearing small patches of armor.

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INT. stone house — day

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The house is simple, it has a bed in the corner, candles in about every corner, a table made from wood and a few sheets hung up as doors. there is a man siting at the desk writing. behind him is a woman wearing a large white toga with her hair in a pony tail.

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The man

The creator said that we where formed from their loneliness, their wants and their dreams. the creator said that we where created to watch over them.

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The woman standing by the door walks close behind him.

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The woman

Are you still writing? haven't you've finished that all ready?

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The man

No, Martha, I've been working on a side project for myself. I finished the story for our hero. I hope the higher ups are pleased with it.

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Martha

If it is anything like your other stories, they're sure to love it. oh, by the way. we have a visitor.

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The visitor is wearing a red robe in his hands, is a book. he parts the sheet and enters.

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The visitor

Ah, Martha, Angelus. so nice to see you two. is that another story of you're, i must say I adored the last one.

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Angelus

What brings you to are humble home, Redner?

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Redner

I've come with a message from the higher ups. the wish for an audience, all must attend.

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The two of them fallow the visitor to the auditorium. it is a big building, with no widows. in side of the building is a giant entry way covered with large sheets of purple and gold. behind the curtains is a large round table. surrounding the table is a large group of men and women wearing purple robes. at the center of the table is a map of the land.

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INT. aditorium — dark

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Leader

i will have order in the meeting. (the sound of everyone talking stops) now to the problem at hand. Is everyone here now? (a man nodes) Good. there have been reports of other groups going against our laws. (he is interrupted)

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Pyro

They talk about a war. if we do not act, then all will be lost.

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Angelus

all of this talk about a war. why can't we just come to terms with them? instead of bloodshed why not compromise.

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Pyro

Peace and understanding? is that really your plan, Angelus? tell me would any of you in this room believe the words coming from this writer's mouth? he has no experience in battle. (the crowd starts to yell)

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Angelus

How dare you question me. What i write becomes faith. I've sent many men to their deaths and have created heroes out of all of them. So how dare you question me.

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Leader

Pyro, is write. What would you do then?

LtLJack - on 09/12/2008 2 versions.

Angelus

... Then we must prepare, a battle will engulf this town. I want the women and children sent to the Sphere. I would expect an attack at dusk, when everyone is about to go to sleep. I volunteer and i ask any man here to do the same. tell me, Pyro, what will you do for this battle?

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Pyro

i will stock the armory, and gather the troops. I hope you're as mighty with a sword as you are with a pen.

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Leader

Fine, we will take it to a vote. Does anyone disagree with the writer of Faith and the God of war's plan?

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Martha

Yes, i do. If we go to war what's going to stop them from attacking the sphere.

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leader

the bringer of life is right. let that also be accounted in your choice. may the creators watch over us as we watch over the sphere.

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A few days have past. there is a large convoy of wagons as people starts to leave. Martha is standing there with a group of guards trying to get her on one of the wagons.

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Martha

Get your hands off of me. i don't wish to go.

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Angelus walks over wearing small pieces of armor, covering his shoulders chest and crouch.

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Angelus

What's going on over here. unhand her right this instance.

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Guard

we have our orders. she and all the other women and children as well as the oil and sick are to go to the sphere.

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Angelus

Don't you tell me what your orders are. I am the one who issued them. Now unhand her, she too, has an important part in this battle. (the Guards step back) if that is all of, then start moving and don't look back.

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Guard

I sir, may the creators shine good faith upon you.

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The convoy of wagons starts moving, it vanishes in the far distance. Angelus turns to Martha.

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Angelus

you should of left with them. if you got hurt, I... I don't know what I'd do.

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Martha

you and I both know that you're lost with out me. so give me a sword or bow and let's get out of here.

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INT. a tent outside of the aditurium — night

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Angelus, Martha, and the main guard are standing around a table with a map of the land. on the map is a few x's showing where the enemy is.

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Main Guard

the scouts have us looking at and 5 to every one of us. they have troops located here and here. were pretty much surrounded on all sides.

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Angelus

How many in our unit?

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M Guard

117, damn if only we had 300 more.

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Martha

Where's Pyro, shouldn't he be here too?

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M guard

he's on a scouting mission, to see if he can funnel down the enemy.

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Redner the messenger rushes into the tent.

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Redner

they're about to attack. they've moved on to the southern wall.

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Angelus

The southern wall, how many stationed? Martha we have to go now.

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Angelus and Martha run out of the tent and steel Redner's white horse. at the southern wall, the hedge is on fire and a small platoon of guards is standing there, shields raised high and spears at hand.

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Angelus (CONT'D)

who ever is in charge here. get me a sword and a bow and arrows. everyone fall back to park.

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The hedge falls down, and a large group of troops rushes in. our troops fall back to the park. one of the guards throws a sword to Angelus, Martha jumps off to grab a bow. Angelus turns to the men and yells, Martha jumps back on the horse and they ride into the large group of enemy solders.

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Angelus (CONT'D)

everyone stay hidden and strict without warning, i will go on ahead, i need you to form a new wall to prevent them from advancing.

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Angelus and Martha charge into the large group of enemy solders, Angelus lowers his sword and forces people out of the way while Martha started killing them one at a time. the horse gets hit and they both fall to the floor. Martha is surrounded by the enemy and Angelus fights his way toward here.

LtLJack - on 09/13/2008