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LtLJack added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/12/2008. LtLJack made 25 other changes.
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Angelus
everyone stay hidden and strict without warning, i will go on ahead, i need you to form a new wall to prevent them from advancing.
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The hedge falls down, and a large group of troops rushes in. our troops fall back to the park. one of the guards throws a sword to Angelus, Martha jumps off to grab a bow. Angelus turns to the men and yells, Martha jumps back on the horse and they ride into the large group of enemy solders.
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Angelus
who ever is in charge here. get me a sword and a bow and arrows. everyone fall back to park.
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Angelus and Martha run out of the tent and steel Redner's white horse. at the southern wall, the hedge is on fire and a small platoon of guards is standing there, shields raised high and spears at hand.
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Angelus
The southern wall, how many stationed? Martha we have to go now.
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Redner
they're about to attack. they've moved on to the southern wall.
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Redner the messenger rushes into the tent.
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M guard
he's on a scouting mission, to see if he can funnel down the enemy.
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Martha
Where's Pyro, shouldn't he be here too?
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M Guard
117, damn if only we had 300 more.
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Angelus
How many in our unit?
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Main Guard
the scouts have us looking at and 5 to every one of us. they have troops located here and here. were pretty much surrounded on all sides.
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Angelus, Martha, and the main guard are standing around a table with a map of the land. on the map is a few x's showing where the enemy is.
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INT. a tent outside of the adituriumnight
LtLJack added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/12/2008 [view]
Martha
you and I both know that you're lost with out me. so give me a sword or bow and let's get out of here.
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Angelus
you should of left with them. if you got hurt, I... I don't know what I'd do.
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The convoy of wagons starts moving, it vanishes in the far distance. Angelus turns to Martha.
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Guard
I sir, may the creators shine good faith upon you.
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Angelus
Don't you tell me what your orders are. I am the one who issued them. Now unhand her, she too, has an important part in this battle.
(the Guards step back)
if that is all of, then start moving and don't look back.
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Guard
we have our orders. she and all the other women and children as well as the oil and sick are to go to the sphere.
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Angelus
What's going on over here. unhand her right this instance.
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Angelus walks over wearing small pieces of armor, covering his shoulders chest and crouch.
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Martha
Get your hands off of me. i don't wish to go.
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Angelus
... Then we must prepare, a battle will engulf this town. I want the women and children sent to the Sphere. I would expect an attack at dusk, when everyone is about to go to sleep. I volunteer and i ask any man here to do the same. tell me, Pyro, what will you do for this battle?
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Leader
Pyro, is write. What would you do then?
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