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LtLJack added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/10/2008. LtLJack made 27 other changes.
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A few days have past. there is a large convoy of wagons as people starts to leave. Martha is standing there with a group of guards trying to get her on one of the wagons.
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leader
the bringer of life is right. let that also be accounted in your choice. may the creators watch over us as we watch over the sphere.
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Martha
Yes, i do. If we go to war what's going to stop them from attacking the sphere.
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Leader
Fine, we will take it to a vote. Does anyone disagree with the writer of Faith and the God of war's plan?
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Pyro
i will stock the armory, and gather the troops. I hope you're as mighty with a sword as you are with a pen.
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Angelus
... Then we must prepare, a battle will engulf this town. I want the women and children sent to the Sphere. I would start my attack at dusk, when the everyone is about to go to sleep. I volunteer. tell me, Pyro, what will you do for this battle?
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Leader
the writer, Angelus, is write. What would you do then?
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Angelus
How dare you question me. What i write becomes faith. I've sent many men to their deaths and have created heroes out of all of them. So how dare you question me.
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Pyro
Peace and understanding? is that really your plan, Angelus? tell me would any of you in this room believe the words coming from this writer's mouth? he has no experience in battle.
(the crowd starts to yell)
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Angelus
all of this talk about a war. why can't we just come to terms with them? instead of bloodshed why not compromise.
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Pyro
They talk about a war. if we do not act, then all will be lost.
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Leader
i will have order in the meeting.
(the sound of everyone talking stops)
now to the problem at hand. Is everyone here now?
(a man nodes)
Good. there have been reports of other groups going against our laws.
(he is interrupted)
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INT. aditoriumdark
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The two of them fallow the visitor to the auditorium. it is a big building, with no widows. in side of the building is a giant entry way covered with large sheets of purple and gold. behind the curtains is a large round table. surrounding the table is a large group of men and women wearing purple robes. at the center of the table is a map of the land.
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Redner
I've come with a message from the higher ups. the wish for an audience, all must attend.
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Angelus
What brings you to are humble home, Redner?
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The visitor
Ah, Martha, Angelus. so nice to see you two. is that another story of you're, i must say I adored the last one.
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The visitor is wearing a red robe in his hands, is a book. he parts the sheet and enters.
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Martha
If it is anything like your other stories, they're sure to love it. oh, by the way. we have a visitor.
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The man
No, Martha, I've been working on a side project for myself. I finished the story for our hero. I hope the higher ups are pleased with it.
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The woman
Are you still writing? haven't you've finished that all ready?
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The woman standing by the door walks close behind him.
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The man
The creator said that we where formed from their loneliness, their wants and their dreams. the creator said that we where created to watch over them.
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The house is simple, it has a bed in the corner, candles in about every corner, a table made from wood and a few sheets hung up as doors. there is a man siting at the desk writing. behind him is a woman wearing a large white toga with her hair in a pony tail.
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INT. stone houseday
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The farm land is surrounded by a giant hedge, it goes all the way around the land in a box shape. on the land is a small area of houses made from stone. the people in the village are wearing a large toga in white, some are wearing purple others are wearing small patches of armor.
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EXT. rich farm landday
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