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This is your first scene. Last edited by agentyork, on 12/25/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

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INT-TRANCITY MIDDLE-MORNING

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WE PAN DOWN FRM THE GREY TO A LARGE BUILDING, THERE ARE SRIENS IN THE BACKGROUND AS WE IN TO A DARKAHLL WAY AND ZOOM IN A YOUNG MAN FIGITING INSIDE HIS BACKPACK WHILE ANOTHER in "MASK" STANDS OUT ON LOOKOUT.

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BOY 1 (LOOKS AT BOY 2

hurry up!

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boy 2

will you wait a sec (sighs relife) yes!

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he pulls out a black mask and joins boy 1 as he puts it on.

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BOY 1

how do i look

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boy 2

like a damn creeper, come on we got to meet the new guy

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INT-EIGHT GRADE HALLWAY-MORNING

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THE TWO MASKED MEN RACE DOWN GRIPPING THEIR BAGS AND DODGING THE CAMERAS IN THE HALL, INSIDE THE SECURITY OFFICE A LARGE SECURITY MAN EATS HIS LUNCH AND STARES AT HIS COMPUTER, THE MASKED MEN ARE CLEARLY VISABLE, SUDDENLY HE GRABBED FROM BEHIND AND IS CHOKED TO DEATH BY A MYSTERIOUS HAND, WE PAN UP TO SEE YET ANOTHER MASKED MAN BUT IS WEAR A JASON VANHOOSE MASK INSTEAD. THE MASKED MAN CROUCHES TO THE DEAD GUARDS FACE AND CHUKLES WITH DELIGHT.

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skull

..you now what they say,...gultony is a sin

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INT-THE VAULT-DAY

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WE PAN LEFT TO THE TWO MASKED MEN ARE CLIMBING UP THE STAIRS WHERE THEY STOP IN THEIR TRACKS AS THEY SEE THE VANHOOSE MASK MAN.

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BOY 1 (WALKS UP TO Him)

where the hell have you been

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skull

don't get your panties in a bunch, (shows him his phone) , we got fiftteen minutes

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boy 2

i thoguht the principle doesn't cme till eight thirty

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skull

i don't make the rules, i'm just the new guy

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BOY 1

doesn't matter to me, all that matter is we get these test scores before final exam or dad is gonna crack my neck

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boy 2

well lets just do it before you know who shows up

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ALL THREE MASK MEN SLOWLY ADVANCE DOWN THE HALL, THEY STOP BECAUSE A TEACHER LOOKING AT HIS CELL PHONE IS WALKING DOWN THE HALL, THEY QUICKLY RUN INTO THE BATHROOM, WHEN THE TEACHER GET CLOSER GET THE DOOR HE IS SUDDENLY GRABBED BY THE VANHOOSE MASK BOY AND HAS HIS NECK CRACKED.

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BOY 1 AND 2 RACE OUT OF THE BATHROOM.

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BOY 1

shit

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boy 2

why'd you do that

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skull

(stares at them) quiet!, this was part of the deal remember, i get 1 kill in return for those test scores

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they charge down the hall into an empty office, as boy 1 and 2 keep guard the vahoose masked man reaches the desk and quickly searches the cabnite.

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skull (CONT'D)

come on, come on, yes! (pulls out a folder) were rich gentlemen!

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boy 1

lets move!

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INT-PARKING LOT-DAY

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ALL THREE MASKED MEN RACE DOWN THE PARKING LOT TO A BLUE SEDAN, BUT ONLY MASKED BOY 1 AND 2 GET INSIDE.

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BOY 1 (CONT'D)

DUDE GET IN!

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skull (CONT'D)

..nah i'm just going to stick around for the show

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BOY 1

what!

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boy 2

(doesn't notice that he's pulling a gun) forget this dude man lets-

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the vanhoose masked man fires three shots into the car, and drops the pistol on the ground.

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skull

oh i'm sorry..did i shoot you (opens the door and drags boy 1 body out on the floor) sorry to do this to you kid but i got to make my name ( pulls out marker and draws a symbol, (notices the sirens getting closer) oops gotta go see ya

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the vanhoose man walks way and we fade into darkness with only the police sirens palying in the background.

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INT-THE PARKING LOT-DAY

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WE HOLD...

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raider

this wolrds still going to the dogs, crime is spewing left and right,

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newspaper artitcles being to fade in and out: economy collapses,war on terror, crime incresces.

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raider (CONT'D)

with a terrible economy people are forced to get into drastic measures to keep up their rent, jobs are out of buisness now crime is their only choice

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we fade into a locker room, the scene seems pretty normal with ther lockers and gym equipment, but suddenly someone is hurled into the room and slams into one of the lockers, follwed by him is three misfits chuckling with delight.

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trevor

get up rodney, now

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rodney (in pain)

ooo

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rodney begins to lift himself up but trevor high kicks him into a seat.

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rodney (in pain) (CONT'D)

ugh!

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one of trevors goons grab rodney by the neck.

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rodney (in pain) (CONT'D)

hey!- let me go- i didn't do anything

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trevor

oh yeah like i'm going to believe you, you i'm stupid, i've lost alot of shit beacause of you!

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rodney

..i didn't know that skull would do that, i barely know the guy, but he said that he worked for free and i thought-

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trevor wacks his face.

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trevor

you thought what!,all of these freaks popping out of the tree's and you decided to hire them to do the job, he was probaly one of vincents guys man!

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rodney

i didn't know!

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trevor

SHUT IT! (in rage he pulls a switch knife from his pocket and flicks it neat rodneys neck) the boss says we don't need you services anymore, i doubt the police are going to investigate shit once they find out who he is

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rodney

no please man!

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voice

ENOUGH!

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we see a sillhoute near the left corner of the camera, standing near the door is large man in a black armor and mask the covers on the top of his face.

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goon 1

the hell

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trevor

IT'S ONE OF THOSE FREAKS WITH MASK, THE RENEGADE

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GOON 2

(DRAWS knife) i'm getting real tired of fighting you freaks

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THE renegade

all your doing is causing violence and distruped the order of justice, in my defense your the freaks!

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trevor

quiet, what are you even doing here, i'm going to give you the benift od doubt that your not here to waste me, cause that would be f'ing ridiculous!

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THE renegade steps foward in a mocking hand fashion

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THE renegade

all talk in no play huh, lets find out

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goon 1

...is this idoit high

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trevor (to goon 2)

what can i tell ya, all thes freaks are nothing but-

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the renegade boot slams into the drug dealers face, sending him crashing into goon1 and rodney.

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GOON 2

what!

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THE renegade slugs him in the chest and body slams him into the lockers, trevor suddenly regains strength and hcarges him with a barrage of puches that the cursader easily dodges and performs a sipral kick at his neck causing him to fall on one knee and then finishes him off by doing a double kick manuver.

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trevor

UGH!

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THE renegade

shut up!

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He lifts him by the shirt neck and slams him into one of the lockers onto a seat.

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trevor

..ahh..my head

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tHE renegade (to rodney)

you! get over here

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rodeny willingly walks over to them and sits next to a nosed bleeding trevor.

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THE renegade

now this how it's going to work, you tell me what i wanna to know and i let you live

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rodney

right

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trevor

screw you

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the renegade slams his head finally knocking him out cold.

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THE renegade

....that mother fucker talks to much

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rodney

it's you, your him, the raider

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THE renegade

sorry i'm afraid i'm not associated with him in anyway, i'm a new hero the renegade

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rodney

the renegade

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THE renegade

right, you must be rodney lincon right, yestersday you made a deal with a highly dangerous bankmen by the name skull am i correct

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rodney

...i don't know

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THE renegade

don't lie to me kid, unless you want to be like stupid ass over here

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