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Quick pitch

Earth 2020: Aliens attack looking for new planet to harvest. Jameson a retired soldier from the late 90s loses his family in a horrible accident and pledges to kill the aliens as brutally as they killed his family. Jameson meets some friends who help him and help the earth along the way. But do they defeat the invasion. This story is told by jameson after the movie and after he has lived all the events. Part two and three may be him telling the story again or it may be following him through the experience.
This is part one of a three part series if you like it i will write the other parts up asap.

Project Type: Feature Film (An hour)

This project's owner would like a little help on parts of the project.

Recent changes

Trissy edited an action in "Scene 9: the final breath" 5 months ago. more
Jameson walks over to where the voice came from and he sees the Colonel sitting on the ground with some debris from the alien ship stuck in his side. Tears trickle down Jamesons dace as he runs over to colonel and tries to get him up.
Trissy edited dialogue in "Scene 9: the final breath" 6 months ago. Trissy made 52 other changes. more
Colonel Parker
And I with you. Now get going and lead my men to victory.
Trissy added an action in "Scene 9: the final breath" 6 months ago. Trissy made 21 other changes. more
And with that Parkers head droops down and he goes out cold. Jameson gets up and walks off with the others into the sunset as the song 21 guns starts playing and the credits role.
Trissy edited a slugline in "Scene 4: Colonel Parker" 6 months ago. Trissy made 8 other changes. more
INT. EXT: Dust road outside Nevada
MusicMaster commented on the outline. 7 months ago. more
This seems very generic. The quick pitch has a few things that don't make sense. Why would aliens attack a planet so they can sleep? If he loses his family in an accident why does it say, "pledges to kill the aliens as brutally as they killed his family."?
 

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