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Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013. Tony15 made 15 other changes.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christophers dad
(looks down at his feet)
She's in her room,
(looks at Christopher)
laying down.
Tony15 edited an action in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
Christopher's dad walks out of the kitchen with two glasses of whiskey. He sits next to Christopher and hands him the drink.
Tony15 edited an action in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
Christopher walks to go sits down on a rundown couch. His dad walks into the kitchen that's messy with dirty dishes scattered all about it.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
I've been working on a lot of cases. I'm a lawyer now and I've been very busy the past several years. And I just thought I would come down for the holidays.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christophers dad
Christopher, where, where have you been? It's been almost ten years since I've last seen you.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
Oh, if I would have known, I wouldn't have bothered come.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christophers dad
(opening the door)
John? I thought I said I never want to see your.....
Tony15 edited dialogue in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
(smiling)
It's John, from Tennessee.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
Oh, if i would have known, i wouldnt have come.
Tony15 edited an action in "arrival" on 10/09/2013 [view]
They both walk inside.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
(stands up and laughs)
Why isn't she out here, it's the afternoon. And the mother I've always known doesn't take naps.
(starts walking to her room)
Although, this would be a good time to go and surprise her.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christophers dad
(looks down off to the left)
She's in her room,
(looks at Christopher)
laying down.
Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
No thank you, I've already had more then enough of my fair share of alcohol, and speaking of mother; where is she?
Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christophers dad
Well,it's been tough, we've been going through a drought this harvest season and the cattle has been dying. I can't sell enough crops to support me and your mother.
(lifts up a glass)
Would you care for a drink?
Tony15 edited dialogue in "the discovery" on 10/09/2013 [view]
christopher
How's life been going for you? You've been asking for quit a bit of money lately.
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