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The new crack

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by Tan Carter

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EXT-STREET CORNER-DAY

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JOHNNY approaches B with crumpled money in his hand. He moves like he is a fiend. JOHNNY hands B the money and she counts it.

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B

What is this? This isn't even half of the cash!

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JOHNNY

I'm sorry B, this is all I have! Please let me buy just one. I need it!

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B

You wasting my time Johnny! What I tell you about coming to my block if you don't have the cash?! Stop playing with my money!

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JOHNNY

Come on B, please. I need this baaaad! I'll do anything! Please. Please. Please.

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B

Anything, huh? I heard Daisy has been on my block selling some hybrid crap. What's she sellin?

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JOHNNY

Awwww, B! You know I ain't no snitch.

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B

Fine! Then get out of my face. You look like a junkie! Scram!

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JOHNNY

No! Please! B! Wait! She's selling Samoas!! OK, B! She's selling Samoas and everyone wants them!

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JOHNNY burst out into tears as B starts to walk away

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B

Everyone wants them?! Do you want Samoas too?!

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B pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints. B opens the box revealing one row of Thin Mints. B takes out one cookie and slowly eats it.

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JOHNNNY

No! Please! I'm loyal to Thin Mints. You know this. Please. Give me just one.

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JOHNNY lounges at B to grab a cookie. B moves as JOHNNY falls and starts sobbing. B opens her jean jacket revealing a sash full of badges. She points to one.

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B

You see this badge? I got this when I made a shank out of wood and grass during my 3 month stay at the Ottawatta campgrounds.

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B motions with her hands that she will slit his throat.

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JOHNNY

Here comes Daisy, now! I don't need your stupid Thin Mints! Samoas are better!

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Daisy

Well, hello Brownie! How are your sales going?

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B

Ha. Ha. Get off my block Daisy. You know this is the top sellers corner.

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DAISY

Which is why it's now my corner.

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