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DAISY
Which is why it's now my corner.
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B
Ha. Ha. Get off my block Daisy. You know this is the top sellers corner.
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JOHNNY
She's selling Samoas!! OK, B! She's selling Samoas and everyone wants them!
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JOHNNY
No! Please! B! Wait! She's selling Samoas!! OK, B! She's selling Samoas and everyone wants them!
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B
I heard Daisy has been on my block selling some hybrid crap. What's she sellin?
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B
What is this? This isn't even half of the cash!
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JOHNNNY
No! Please! I'm loyal to Thin Mints. You know this. Please. Give me just one.
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B
Fine! Then get out of my face. You look like a junkie! Scram!
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JOHNNY nods his head in agreement and B is surveying the block suspiciously.
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B
Anything, huh? I heard Daisy has been on my block selling some hybrid crap. What's she sellin?
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Daisy
Well, hello Brownie! How are your sales going?
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JOHNNY
Here comes Daisy, now! I don't need your stupid Thin Mints! Samoas are better!
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B
If I see you with that purple box.....
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JOHNNY stops eating out of fear
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JOHNNY lounges at B to grab a cookie. B moves as JOHNNY falls and starts sobbing. B opens her jean jacket revealing a sash full of badges. She points to one.
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B pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints. B opens the box revealing one row of Thin Mints. B takes out one cookie and slowly eats it.
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B
Mmmmmm. These are so good.
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JOHNNNY
No. I'm loyal to Thin Mints. You know this. Please. Give me just one.
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B pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints. B opens the box revealing one row of Thin Mints. She opens the row and eats one. B Slowly reveals her sash of badges and points to one.
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B
Everyone wants them?! Do you want Samoas too?!
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B pockets the cash and pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints. B opens the box revealing one row of Thin Mints. She opens the row and eats one. B Slowly reveals her sash of badges and points to one.
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B
Mmmmmm. These are so good.
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B pockets the cash and pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints. B opens the box revealing one row of Thin Mints. She opens the row and eats one. JOHNNY rips open the box and begins to inhale the cookies. B Slowly reveals her sash of badges and points to one.
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B
Fine! Then get out of my face. You're bad for my business. Get outta here! You look like a junkie! Scram!
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JOHNNY
I'm sorry B, this is all I have! Please let me buy just one. I need it!
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B
You wasting my time Johnny! What I tell you about coming to my block if you don't have the cash?! Stop playing with my money!
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B gestures that she will slit his throat again as she hides behind a trash can and JOHNNY runs off. Daisy walks up in full uniform, bright eyed and pig tailed.
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B
Get outta here! And remember!
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JOHNNY
Here comes Daisy, now!
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B
Samoas, eh? They're not even cookies! They're candy disguised as cookies!
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B
I heard Daisy has been on my block selling some hybrid crap. What's she sellin?
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NB
You wasting my time Johnny! You know I don't come out of the house for anything less than 2 boxes! Now, stop playing with my money!
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B motions with her hands that she will slit his throat.
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B
If I see you with that purple box.....
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JOHNNY stops eating out of fear
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B
You see this badge?
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B pockets the cash and pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints. JOHNNY rips open the box and begins to inhale the cookies. B Slowly reveals her sash of badges and points to one.
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B
And if I see you on my corner with that purple box....There's gonna be a bigger issue.
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B
I got this badge when I made a shank out of wood and grass during my 3 month stay at the Ottawatta campgrounds.
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B slowly reveals her sash of badges and points to one.
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B
And if I see you on my corner with that purple box. It's going to be an issue
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B pockets the cash and pulls out of her backpack a box of Thin Mints.
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JOHNNY
I'm sorry B, this is all I have! Please let me buy just one box. I need it!
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B
I heard Daisy has been on my block selling some high grade hybrid crap. What's she sellin?
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NB
You wasting my time Johnny! You know I don't come out of the house for anything less than 2 boxes! Now, stop playing with my money
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B pockets the cash and pulls out of her backpack to boxes of Thin Mints.
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B
Samoas, eh?
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JOHNNY
She's selling Samoas!! OK, B! She's selling Samoas and everyone wants them!
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JOHNNY burst out into tears as B starts to walk away
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