Unlocking
The Ravages script has been unlocked. There's been some great enriching of the story at The Nine Orders, with good backstory. Please continue to add your thoughts, and shape the story here.
Posted a year ago by matthanson
The Ravages back story
What happened before the start of the film. Help fill in the background.
Focus on structure
I have frozen the writing of the screenplay for the moment so we can focus on the structure and the characters. Please refer to the two thread on ASOA for more details about the future actions.
Script: The Ravages
Admin: The Ravages
If you have more ideas for scenes, don't bin them! Just store them in your sandbox or on your favourite offline screenplay tool until we start writing again! Thanks for all the good work so far :o)
Script: The Ravages
Admin: The Ravages
If you have more ideas for scenes, don't bin them! Just store them in your sandbox or on your favourite offline screenplay tool until we start writing again! Thanks for all the good work so far :o)
Edited by jpdrecourt two years ago.
VR Helmet design by Jeremy Ray
This an attempt at embedding a box.net widget for media on Plotbot... and it doesn't work ;o) So I provide the link to the pic on box.net. Please comment if you don't manage to see it
Thanks for all the writing
Thank you all for your ideas and the new scenes! For the moment, I'll just let the screenplay develop a bit so that fresh ideas can add themselves to the original outline. Keep adding and editing! And feel free to add more scenes from the original outline if you feel inspired by any of them.
JP
JP
Posted two years ago by jpdrecourt
A fiesta description
By owen:
I imagine a bare room that looks like it could once have been a church hall lit by patchy fluorescent lighting. It is full of people, dressed in normal street clothes. A lot of the people seem almost embarrassed to be there. Some people begin to undress and the rest follow. Under their clothes they are all dressed up to the neck in these weird body suits...
I imagine a bare room that looks like it could once have been a church hall lit by patchy fluorescent lighting. It is full of people, dressed in normal street clothes. A lot of the people seem almost embarrassed to be there. Some people begin to undress and the rest follow. Under their clothes they are all dressed up to the neck in these weird body suits...
Edited by jpdrecourt two years ago.
Power relationships
Comment by Tagline on the forum:
Joanna - direct power over the virtual world and everyone in it
August - direct power over the physical world and everyone in it
Cass - indirect power through taking control of her life and finding her true self and finding happiness
Alex - indirect power through the admirable qualities of knowledge and integrity
Joanna - direct power over the virtual world and everyone in it
August - direct power over the physical world and everyone in it
Cass - indirect power through taking control of her life and finding her true self and finding happiness
Alex - indirect power through the admirable qualities of knowledge and integrity
Posted two years ago by jpdrecourt
First elements in
I put the short outline, but can't upload the long synopsis.
Added the first 10 scenes, will add more when time is available.
Added the first 10 scenes, will add more when time is available.
Posted two years ago by jpdrecourt
