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Joanna works on the downgrading of a network Last edited by tagline, two years ago. 12 comments. More scene info.

EXT. Old Warehouse — Morning

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A silent, desolate space. Footsteps approach. Dust and detritus scatters from the pavement as JOANNA - an attractive middle-aged woman with gushing red hair whose face bears the marks of a life well lived - strides purposefully to the chained and padlocked doors of the warehouse. On the door has been spray painted a large yellow circle with the number 4 inside. She carries a LARGE LEATHER CARRY-ALL.

Joanna

This must be the place.

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She pulls a PDA from her coat. The screen reads: "765 Terrace Road, Camden Town - suspected location of operational network equipment. GPS match confirmed"

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joanna (CONT'D)

I guess so.

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Joanna places the bag on the ground, unzips it, then takes out a large set of BOLTCUTTERS. She cleanly cuts through the chain. The door swings open with a push.

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Joanna (CONT'D)

Coming to get you.

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She places the PDA on the ground before entering the building.

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INT. old warehouse — morning

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Tall columns of dust sparkle with god-light; sunlight beaming through holes in the ceiling. Joanna heads for an office on the far side of the structure. Its all clear.

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INT. Office — Morning

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A short bank of servers blink in a glass fronted case. On closer inspection only two of the four servers appear to be in working order. Joanna opens her bag and pulls out two similar looking boxes. She swaps these for those in the case and then zips up her bag. She then traces her way back outside.

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EXT. Old Warehouse — Morning

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Joanna picks up the PDA.

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Joanna

Hey Mr. Tracker, now it's your turn.

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Joanna taps the screen purposefully. A message is displayed: "Visual and Geographical recording of Network Equipment down grade operational."

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We retrace Joanna's steps through the grainy image of the recording PDA.

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INT. Office — Morning

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We stop in front of the inactive servers.

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joanna

The servers appear to be switched off. Now using electromagnetic pulse to permanently disable servers.

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A strange device is pulled from the leather bag. Joanna activates it causing obvious damage to the units.

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joanna (CONT'D)

Units deactivated. Now replacing network connection with lo-fi unit.

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The new unit is installed with little fuss.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Job complete. Recording off.

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The PDA's screen flashes then goes dark.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Time to go home and really have some fun - fiesta here we come.

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Joanna leaves the building pleased with a job well faked. She allows herself a little congratulatory mamba as she goes - anticipating the fun of the gathering.

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INT. Scout Hall — Night

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The floors are old and scratched, the walls need a new coat of paint. The ceiling in surprisingly good order though. There are Luddite posters and propaganda on the walls. Ironic, given the late night events that take place here. Joanna enters with her new toys.

JOANNA

Let's wire up these babies. That'll give us four more ports. That means four new members. Sweet.

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Joanna moves through the hall into the old canteen and storage room. She checks over her shoulder for spying eyes before pulling down hard on the tap of the disused urn. A panel slides back to reveal a ladder into the roof.

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INT. Roof Cavity — Night

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Server boxes - like those Joanna has recently acquired - line the floor in even rows. There are poles either side of each machine. Long cables connected to masks hang from each. There are six empty racks at one end of the floor - Joanna proceeds to fill two of them.

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INT. Scout hall — night

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Joanna walks to the middle of the hall. She sits down cross legged. There is a mischievous glint in her eyes as she looks up to the ceiling. She holds a small keyring in her hand. She pushes the button - a quiet spring loaded CLICK. The entire ceiling becomes a cascade of white wires and masks. Above Joanna they fall a few short inches short of her head. (Does she give it a quick test now or not?)

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Joanna

(laughing) Oh no, the Luddites are here!

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A click of her keyring and all the masks shoot straight back into the ceiling without a trace.

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Joanna (CONT'D)

Find that you tech-haters. Can't bear to see anyone else have any fun. Well some people can't afford all the luxuries that your grand pappies inheritance brings - so for us poor bastards who earn our pennies I'm gonna put on the all time best party that they've ever seen. Take that and smoke it!

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August arrives to a neo-luddite rally with his indifferent wife Last edited by jpdrecourt, two years ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

EXT. NEO-Luddite Rally — Day

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A fine old BENTLEY pulls up by the curb - one of the few working vehicles left since the Ravages. A well dressed man steps from the car. His name is AUGUST and he appears well aware of his own importance. He is smoking a Schwarzenegger sized CIGAR. He steps around the vehicle opening the passenger door for his wife CASS - blond pretty and 26. He does this for pomp and ceremony; as his wife gets out he is scanning the crowd for other important and powerful colleagues. Cass is young and attractive but appears downtrodden.

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CASS

Will you introduce me to some of your friends today August?

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August

I'm afraid you'll have to look after yourself Cass. I have to prepare myself. I have to stir this crowd into action if we are ever to get society back on its feet.

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Cass

But there must be one of the other wives that you can quickly point out to me? I don't know anyone!

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August

You know this is important to me. Don't keep making things difficult. (beat) Meet me back at the car after my speech.

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August takes off purposefully into the throng. Leaving Cass standing hopelessly.

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CASS

(In a small voice) Locked away in a large house or thrown into the faceless crowd. Perpetually alone.

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Cass, wanders into the crowd, sad, dispirited.

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Cass slips away from the rally during August's speech Last edited by jpdrecourt, two years ago. 8 comments. More scene info.

EXT. NEO-Luddite Rally — Day

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CASS stands at the edge of the throng of neo-luddites, looking bored, depressed and lonely. AUGUST is on stage. His voice can be heard booming over the PA system.

AUGUST

My friends, VR is the scourge of our society and must be stopped

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AUDIENCE

Cheering

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AUGUST

VR tears at the very fabric of our society, ripping our very social bonds, it turns otherwise good people into immoral degenerates

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More cheers and clapping from the audience.

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AUGUST (CONT'D)

We remember the scourges of our childhood; drugs, pornography, prostitution! We know that VR encompasses all those vile things!

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AUDIENCE

Yeah! Au-gust, Au-gust, Au-gust...

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AUGUST

And now, after the Ravages, when we most need to band together to rebuild society! (beat) There are loathsome individuals who want to steal your children, steal your friends - make them addicts, vile addicts - and keep us all in fear, poverty and desolation.

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The chanting from the audience peaks in a fit of fanaticism.

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AUGUST (CONT'D)

So I tell you, our Enemy is clear. We will not stand passive as VR rapes us of our morals. We will take the fight to...

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AUGUST continues to rant to a crowd in frenzy. CASS turns and walks away.

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EXT. DESERTED STREETS — DAY

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CASS walks through the deserted streets. She does not appear to have an intended destination, making decisions to turn at the last minute, on a whim.

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EXT. RAILWAY BRIDGE — LATE AFTERNOON

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CASS walks half way over a railway bridge. She looks off the side to see the afternoon sun sparkle off the tracks. As she does this she spies a shabbily dressed man standing near a door. He looks around cautiously, then quickly slips inside. CASS, bolstered by intense curiosity, heads for a service ladder that will take her down beneath the bridge.

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EXT. DESERTED ALLEYWAY — LATE AFTERNOON

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As CASS approaches the door, she looks around, and pauses uncertainly before stepping inside. As she steps towards the door UNKNOWN MAN #1 runs around the corner of the alleyway, straight towards her and the door.

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UNKNOWN MAN #1

Quickly! Inside! They're coming!

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UNKNOWN MAN #1 hurries her through the door, shutting the door behind them

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INT. AUTO REPAIR SHOP — LATE AFTERNOON

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The repair shop is poorly lit despite it still being light. The windows are solidly boarded up. VR masks hang from the ceiling, some with unconscious bodies connected to them. CASS and UNKNOWN MAN #1 stand next to the door. UNKNOWN MAN #1 puts his finger in front of his lips and looks pointedly at CASS

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LUDDITE VOICE #1

He came this way!

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LUDDITE VOICE #2

Where is he? I don't see him!

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LUDDITE VOICE #1

He must have run down the alley! Quickly!

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CASS and UNKNOWN MAN #1 stay still and silent as the footsteps recede.

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UNKNOWN MAN #1

I haven't seen you around before, who are you?

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CASS

Er, Hi, I'm Cass. What is this place? Who were those guys chasing you?

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UNKNOWN MAN #1

Wow, have you been living under a rock? This is a fiesta. We meet up and connect ourself up to VR. But it's dangerous. The neo-luddites are out to get us. That's who those guys were. If you had shouted out I would probably be dead now. If you aren't involved you should leave. The neo-luddites shoot first and ask questions later, if at all.

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Cass turns away and takes a couple of steps towards the door. She stops and turns part way back, with a curious look on her face.

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CASS

What... What does it feel like?

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UNKNOWN MAN #1

It feels like being released from chains; all the social restrictions are now gone, nobody can hurt you and you can do anything you want; it feels like bliss.

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CASS turns back towards the door and walks through it

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EXT. DESERTED ALLEYWAY — Twilight

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CASS walks down the alley towards the sound of a marketplace

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INT. Geeks Playroom Wonderland — Night

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A scruff of hair balanced on thin shoulders - VR idol guru ALEX NEUMANN - is dwarfed by a digital leviathan. Cables and servers and racks of drives sprawl from a four glowing eyes at the centre. Alex stares intently into the eyes. A left view, a right view, a down view and an idol in three dimensional glory.

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ALEX

(With mad scientist glee) My greatest creation!

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A pretty blond moves naturally in 3d space. She looks around 16.

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ALEX (CONT'D)

Cassandra. Cass. How did I ever lose you? You were too pretty for such a beautiful mind. And the Luddites, thugs... Bastards! They brainwashed you with lies and took you away.

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Alex breaks his gaze from VR-Cass. He begins to clack away again on his keyboard.

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ALEX (CONT'D)

Well, I've reinvented you. In my space. Where no one can take you from me. Where we can talk in peace and merge in virtual bliss.

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Alex still typing. VR-Cass begins to age slowly on the screen.

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ALEX (CONT'D)

And you would now be about 26. So if I now run these aging algorithms that the damn Neo-Luddites kindly paid me to develop for them. (beat) And there we are, like we grew up together.

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The aged VR idol looks exceptionally like Cass - perhaps with slightly bigger boobs and shorter skirt. Did I mention the retro poster of 1980s film "Weird Science" on the wall? That should explain it.

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ALEX (CONT'D)

Of course, my beautiful Cass, without anything in that pretty head of yours, you are just a lifeless doll. All that is left is to create an AI worthy of being you.

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Cass witnesses the neo-luddite militia while they stop a fiesta Last edited by jpdrecourt, two years ago. 2 comments. More scene info.

EXT. DOWNTOWN STREET — NIGHT

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We are in a narrow, crowded street, in what appears to have been a chic fashion district. Now the shops are all closed and boarded up. Street vendors have set up their stalls along the pavements and in the shop doorways, selling everything from dumplings to counterfeit watches. The street is lit by strings of bulbs that criss cross above the crowds. There seem to be people of all nationalities here and there is a constant stream of shouts in a host of different languages. The air is thick with cooking smoke. We see CASS moving through the crowds. In contrast to the rest of the street's inhabitants, she is clearly expensively dressed and this is drawing attention. Some of the vendors follow her and try to sell her various unidentifiable things. Cass ignores them and most of them give up. As the crowd thins, one of the vendors moves to block her way. He is trying to sell her a hat made of what could easily be cat fur.

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STREET VENDOR (CONT'D)

You buy. Yes?

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Cass ignores him and tries to go around. The man moves again to block her path.

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STREET VENDOR (CONT'D)

Pretty lady needs hat, yes? This good hat, real fur. Your hat no good, is cold, yes?

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The man reaches for Cass's hat. She backs away. We can see she is getting a little annoyed. She tries to move around the man again.

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STREET VENDOR (CONT'D)

You try, yes? See is nice hat. Special price for you.

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The man makes another grab for Cass's hat. This time he succeeds in pulling it off. He is trying to put his own hat on her head when Cass ducks around him and starts to walk quickly away. The man follows and they begin an odd sort of chase, Cass almost running and the man trying to put his hat on her head and scuttling to keep up. This continues until Cass takes a sudden turn into a narrow alleyway between two buildings. The man stands at the entrance to the alley for a second then turns back.

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EXT. ALLEYWAY — NIGHT

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The scene has changed quite dramatically. We are in an empty alleyway that appears to link to another street like the one we have come from. The alley is quite dark - lit only by the light from the streets at either end and the occasional red paper lantern. Cass hesitates briefly before moving down the alley. She is about half way down when someone appears at the far end. They are silhouetted by the light from the street and all we can really see is that they are big and menacing. They notice Cass and start moving towards her. Cass looks quickly behind her, decides it is to far to run and ducks into one of the open doorways.

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INT. CHINESE RESTAURANT — NIGHT

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Cass stumbles through the door and finds herself in a busy Chinese restaurant. The place is brightly lit and there appears to be a party going on. A matronly Chinese woman bustles up to Cass.

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RESTAURANT MANAGER

Private party tonigh, sorry. You want a drink? No food til later, but maybe you don't eat much I think. We see what we can do eh?

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CASS

Well, I...

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RESTAURANT MANAGER

You follow me, we look after you.

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The woman moves off. Cass looks back towards the door quickly, then follows her. She is seated at a small table at the back of the room. Cass is handed a menu which she doesn't look at. The party guests are singing in what could be Chinese, but they are so drunk it is hard to tell. After a few moments, Cass slips out of her seat and walks out of the back of the restaurant.

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INT. Chinese Restaurant Small Waiting Room — NIGHT

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There is a toilet door off the waiting area on one side and from the adjacent wall, a well lit corridor leads. Cass tries the door but it is locked. She looks at herself in the mirror and reapplies her lipstick. The corridor is directly behind her in the mirror and as she does her makeup we see something moving across it behind her. Cass turns around but the corridor is empty. She walks down the corridor.

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INT. Chinese Restaurant Corridor — NIGHT

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We can see more clearly now that the corridor is intersected at right angles by another. As she approaches it three NEOLUDDITE MILITA run past in full riot gear, followed by two more a second later. The last one stops in the intersection and looks at Cass. From Cass's POV we cannot see his face under his visor. He says something but it is muffled by his visor. As he stands there the intensity of cries and screams coming from the end of the intersection builds. The militiaman turns back into the corridor and disappears. Cass follows, drawn by morbid curiosity to sounds she has never in her life encountered.

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INT. Chinese Restaurant back room — night

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Cass enters through the open door. The screams are louder now. The scene inside is carnage. There are roughly 15 militia in the room and they are attacking a group of FIESTA GOERS. Some of the fiesta goers are lying on the floor while the militia kick and stamp on them, others sprawled bleeding over broken tables and chairs. Some are trying to escape, blind inside their masks and tethered to the ceiling by the wires that run from their faces, only to be beaten down by the militia. Cass is crouched by the door, watching the whole scene. She is shaking and pulling her coat tight around her. The militia begin to clear out the room, dragging the prostrate bodies out through a back door that leads onto the street.

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EXT. Chinese Restaurant Alleyway — NIGHT

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The millitia strip the Fiesta goers and dump their bodies into the gutter. We can see that they are alive, some if only barely. A large van is parked outside the building, filled with confiscated VR gear. The militiamen climb inside. The van drives off.

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Cass enters the scene - obviously shocked. Overcoming the horror she tries to help some of the unfortunate fiesta goers. She goes to a conscious but severely injured woman - MI-LING. She takes off her coat and wraps it around the woman.

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CASS

Do you speak English?

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MI-LING

Neos have done this. We harm no one and they use such violence!

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CASS

Who are the "Neos"?

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MI-LING

They are the neo-luddites, they want to destroy technology, they want to destroy diversity.

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CASS

The neo-luddites? But August is...

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MI-LING

Yes, Yes. August. Nasty leader of Neos. Also month of father's death. Very bad month.

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Cass steps back struck dumb by this revelation.

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MI-LING (CONT'D)

Hey, I think I know you. You been to fiesta before? Maybe Camden one?

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CASS

I'm going to call an ambulance.

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Cass snaps out of her trance long enough to retrieve her phone and dial. At the far end of the alley we see the silhouette of a woman. The woman appears to approach the scene cautiously. As she does we can see that Cass is speaking to the emergency service over the phone. We cannot hear her. Instead we hear ambulance SIRENS and the sounds of the injured and dying. The silhoutted woman steps under a street lamp. We see that it is JOANNA. She waves to Cass.

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JOANNA

Hey. Cass! Over here!

Cass looks around. She drops the call and walks over to Joanna.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

It is you! You should come with me, it isn't safe here. Not for anyone.

Joanna slips her arm through Cass's and leads her away.

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INT. GEEKS PLAYROOM WONDERLAND — NIGHT

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ALEX is still in the tangle of the beast. As if he never moves.

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ALEX

(Under his breath) Running Cassandra advanced AI. Be real now.

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Alex pulls across the VR rig hanging to his right. He takes hold of the mass of cables, takes the mask and straps it to his face.

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INT. GLADE — VR-SPACE

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A forested glade with cascading waterfall bursts into vibrant VR glory. CASS VR stands by the pool of water - and she is stunning.

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CASS VR

Hi Alex, haven't seen you in a while.

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ALEX VR

I'm surprised that you remember me.

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CASS VR

How could I not remember my first love?

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ALEX VR

Why did you leave me for those thugs?

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CASS VR

I never left you. I'm right here. Alex, you have always been my first love.

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ALEX VR

I guess you're right... In your programming you've never been away, never been unfaithful, always loved me...

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CASS VR

That's right Alex. I've always loved you. I'll be with out for ever.

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The VR glade snaps out of existence.

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INT. GEEKS PLAYROOM WONDERLAND — NIGHT

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Alex removes the mask from his face. He is looking miserable.

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ALEX

Goddamn. All this wasted effort. (beat) Why did I ever think this was going to work? You can't program love!

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Alex growing in fury sweeps keyboard, mouse and DVDs off his desk.

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ALEX (CONT'D)

What the fuck was I thinking!

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More electronic equipment feels the wrath of Alex Neumann in his spiraling rage.

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ALEX (CONT'D)

Piece of shit! Idiot! Idiot! Idiot...

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Chronically unfit an exhausted Alex slumps back in his chair. Sadder and more helpless than a PETA convention at a puppy funeral.

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The Cass VR idol turns slowly on the flat-screens. Alex hauls up his keyboard by the cord. He types something. A message flashes up on the screen: "Posting VR Idol to Creative Commons Forum".

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INT. Scouthall — NIGHT

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JOANNA and CASS enter the empty scout hall.

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JOANNA

Come with me sweetheart. I'll make you a cup of tea... would you like that?

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CASS

OK. Er Yes.

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Joanna heads for the kitchen.

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JOANNA

I'm afraid there aren't really any chairs, but there are loads of cushions and beanbags and the like over it the corner. Drop yourself down there.

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Cass approaches the large unwashed pile with a wrinkle in her nose. Not her usual accommodation, but still shell shocked she drops herself in none-the-less.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

(OS) There's no milk, but do you take sugar?

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Cass sits in BEANBAG still thoroughly bemused by her situation.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

(OS) I'll put in two then. Everyone needs a bit of sweetness to get them through these days.

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Joanna re-enters the room with TWO LARGE MUGS.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Here. This calms me down after the NEOs smash up alternative society.

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Joanna hands Cass the mug, then slumps into a bean bag opposite her.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

So. What brings to you this neighbourhood? I'm not being funny, but it doesn't seem like your kind of place.

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CASS

No. I don't know. I don't think you'd be being so nice if you knew who I was.

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JOANNA

Really? I'd like to think I'm a pretty good judge of character. We've all got secrets, honey.

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Joanna moves away to a pile of shelves in the corner, where there is a small STEREO SYSTEM. She puts on some music. She walks back towards Cass, who is staring into her tea.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Stay here as long as you want. It ain't much but it's safe. My home away from home, as it were.

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CASS

I can't stay here. I've never been away this long. He'll send someone to find me soon. I...

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Cass trails off and looks down again. Joanna moves closer, squats down and looks into Cass's face.

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Joanna

What, your boyfriend? He one of those controlling types? Don't I know it. You're safe here, don't worry.

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CASS

My husband is a killer.

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Cass looks directly into Joanna's eyes.

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CASS (CONT'D)

My husband, August, is a killer!

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Joanna backs away quickly as she realises who Cass is. She stands up. She walks away a bit, then comes back.

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JOANNA

He doesn't know where you are now right?

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Cass shrugs then shakes her head.

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Joanna (CONT'D)

So what are you doing here? What were you doing in Chinatown? What is the wife of the head of the NeoLuddites doing outside a fiesta in Chinatown?

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Cass shrugs again. She looks up. She is clearly upset.

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CASS

I don't know. I didn't know. I didn't know he'd go this far.

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JOANNA

Well, he has. God knows I should throw you out on the street right now.

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CASS

Please. I swear. I never knew. I can't go back there now. I..I don't even know what this is all about.

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JOANNA

Well, maybe it's time you found out.

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Alex ages the face of Cassandra and launches a search on the net

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Cass leaves the dinner table while Augusts rants about neo-luddism Last edited by jpdrecourt, two years ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

Cass leaves the dinner table while Augusts rants about neo-luddism

Cass leaves the dinner table while Augusts rants about neo-luddism

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Joanna Hosts a Fiesta Last edited by tagline, two years ago. 2 comments. More scene info.

INT. SCOUTHALL — EVENING

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JOANNA enters leading two others behind her. STEFAN is short, balding, but with intense energy in his eyes. CASS also enters with bright exuberance.

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JOANNA

Welcome to the world of tomorrow!... Sorry, I watched something on vid a while back and that just stuck with me.

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STEFAN

That was those yellow characters right?

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JOANNA

No, I don't think so.

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She stops close to the kitchen entrance.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Not the best seats in the house I'm afraid. I'm close to a full set of gear so there isn't a whole lot of space left... Sit down a second.

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Joanna sits down crosslegged, the others follow. She clicks on her little keyring. VR gear tumbles from the hatches. Stefan and Cass visibly jump in shock.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

This one's yours Cass.

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Joanna slides Cass a few inches to the right with a friendly push. Then smiles broadly to break any potential awkward pause.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

And this one yours Stefan. Pointing.

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Joanna pulls a couple of coins from her pocket. She hands one to Stefan, one to Cass.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

And this is how you mark your territory.

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CASS

What?

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JOANNA

See other places on the floorboards there are little symbols scratched in? People are a little attached to their places and their gear. You now get to mark your places too.

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CASS taps her coin on the floor with furrowed brow. A burst of inspiration and the tapping becomes concentrated scratching. A picture forms. It is an angel, wings outstretched.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Stefan, You've tried VR before you say. You can handle the mask?

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STEFAN

Yeah, no problem.

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CASS

Yeah, but I'll need help. This thing's like an octopus.

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JOANNA

Hands down. I'll fit you the first time... Not claustrophobic I hope!

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Before Cass can answer the mask is on her face and strap over the back of her head. Cass squirms and brings up her hands. Joanna catches them, pulls them to her and holds them in a warm gesture.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

Breathe deeply. You haven't left reality yet... OK?

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CASS

(Muffled - barely audible) Yes.

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JOANNA

I'm just going to put on a mask myself. Then I'll introduce you into the VR world... Still OK?

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The message is directed to Cass, but both Cass and Stefan nod in ascent.

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POV Joanna. An outstretched hand draws cables and mask forward. As the molded latex envelops, sounds of breathing and a beating heart become audible. In complete darkness these sounds intensify... Then a blinding white.

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INT. BLANK SPACE — VR-SPACE

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A fine looking VR-JOANNA - younger, slimmer and with luminous redhair, a sexed up caricature of her real self - stands beside two identical ghostly outlines.

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CASS

Whoh! You look so cool.

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JOANNA

You run the show you get the best. We'll find you something nice though.

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Stefan has already opened a wardrobe door in nothingness. He flicks through idols like suits on a rack. He seems to be focused on the He-man / Spartacus variety.

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Joanna opens a wardrobe for CASS.

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JOANNA (CONT'D)

My fiesta, my rules. You must choose an idol of consistent age and sex. No pedophiles or relationship duping in my outfit. Otherwise this is fantasy, so knock yourselves out.

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Cass flicks through petite blonds, much like herself.

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Stefan has changed from ghostly figure to Kevin Sorbo in a loin cloth. He has pulled up a virtual mirror and is trying to check out his arse in the reflection.

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CASS

Oh, super cool!

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An idol, with an uncanny resemblance to the real Cass (with slight juvenile tweaks), fills the wardrobe. There is such realism in this idol, the detail so intricate. Even VR-Joanna seems to pale by comparison.

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JOANNA

Oh... yeah, quite nice.

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CASS

Oh yeah! I am so having this one. What do I do?

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STEFAN

Just reach out and touch it.

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A ghostly hand reaches out. Colour pours into the grey; paint filling an outline. VR-CASS holds her new manicured hands before her face. Stefan snaps a mirror into existence for CASS to use.

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STEFAN (CONT'D)

Wow you look so hot!

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Joanna burns with jealousy, tinges with admiration, crawls with annoyance then fades into an uncertain confusion.

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Confidence snaps back into place.

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POV Joanna. An indicator light flashes at the bottom of her vision.

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JOANNA (O.S.)

You two comfortable? The doorbell's ringing... I got sensor alarms set up; we have guests. See you in a bit.

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INT. SCOUTHALL — NIGHT

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Joanna pulls off her mask. She pauses beside Cass, kneeling. She is attracted to her body, by the sensuality of the twitches and spasms, the erotic movement of breasts and hips.

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Joanna stands, then moves to the door to let in her Fiesta regulars.

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It's the Fiesta Last edited by tagline, two years ago. 1 comment. More scene info.

INT. SCOUTHALL — NIGHT

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Bodies litter the room: kneeling, sitting on cushions, sprawled on beanbags, lying prone. The scene is lit by emergency exit signs, light from the kitchen and the eerie flicker that bleeds from the edge of the VR-masks. Cables tendril down like an underwater kelp forest.

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Joanna steps between bodies, some still, some swaying, some convulsing. Her careful gaze scans everyone. When her inspection is complete she takes her own space - an old armchair front and centre. Her mask has twice the cabling and looks an order more impressive. She pulls it on.

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INT. BLENDER — VR-SPACE

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Excited chatter fills the crowded nightclub. It is cutting edge London clubland, Chiba City futuristic, bound together with hard trance. It is second life come of age and pumped with steroids.

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VR-JOANNA

(loud) Welcome to my club! Welcome to my Fiesta! We party 'til dawn!

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A huge cheer from an undeniably appreciative crowd.

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A VR-Bouncer breaks from the crowd to talk to Joanna. He has the harsh, hard head of Vinnie Jones but on a solid body suited in a tuxedo with white bow tie like Pavarotti. Not someone with which you'd want to share a confined space.

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Gauze

No intrusions yet tonight ma'am. Intel indicates that Neo's may use a retro as a decoy at some point during the night then slip in with some kind of trojan.

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VR-JOANNA

Thanks for taking guard tonight Steve. Much appreciated. Victor has offered for the next Fiesta, so I'll make sure you have a good night then.

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GAUZE

Happy to be useful. Let you know later how lame the intrusions were.

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Gauze moves back into the crowd. CASS falls out of the crowd as if pressed out by Gauze exceeding capacity.

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VR-CASS

Heh. Who was that?

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VR-JOANNA

That was our bouncer Gauze.

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VR-CASS

Does he look like that in real life?

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VR-JOANNA

No. Steve, has control of him tonight. Steve's quite a little guy, glasses.

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VR-CASS

Why Gauze?

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VR-JOANNA

Gauze. That was a while ago now, bit of a story.

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VR-CASS

I've got time. I'm pretty much here to hang out with you.

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VR-JOANNA

Well... When I had first started the Fiesta's, done three, maybe four. The Neo's were just starting to use technology themselves to find networks - you know, fight fire with fire. So they dropped in a virus that broke through our quite flimsy firewall. It amped up the VR equipment and gave the party a good dose of current. Some of the gear has built in trip switches, but those not so lucky got facial burns. Eddie Faulkner took the brunt and it fried his brain.

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VR-CASS

That's awful.

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VR-Cass takes VR-Joanna by the arm in a show of sympathy.

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VR-JOANNA

So long story short, we build an idol. Every security system and protection AI bundled up together. In VR it looked like a leper bundled up in gauze bandages. So we called it Gauze. The bouncer look came later.

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VR-Joanna puts a hand around VR-Cass's shoulder.

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VR-JOANNA (CONT'D)

Now let me introduce you to all my friends.

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