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AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009. AbhinavSinha made 19 other changes.
AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
Eduardo makes his way from the tower towards the boy.
AbhinavSinha added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
EDUARDO
That's it.
AbhinavSinha edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
There is a serene calm around the forest. The little boy is back, sitting in the same place he was before. Eduardo is up in his watch tower, looking at the boy.
AbhinavSinha edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
There is a serene calm around the forest. The little boy is back, sitting in the same place he was before.
AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
There is a serene calm around the tunnel. The little boy is back.
AbhinavSinha added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
INT. cut to - ext. tunnel - day
AbhinavSinha added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
EDUARDO
Stop...stop
(now shouting)
STOP! STOP! STOP!
(slams his fist into his desk)
Verdammen!
AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
Eduardo slams the receiver down and stares at the telephone. The distant roar of mortar can also be heard now. Eduardo puts his head in his hands.
AbhinavSinha added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
EDUARDO
Hi. I need to leave a message for Mrs. Gustav...yes, I'll wait.
(pause)
Yes, the message should read as follows...
(hesitates)
nevermind. Thank you.
AbhinavSinha edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
The door creaks open as Eduardo enters. Tired, he drops his walking stick on the ground and limps towards the couch. Plumping himself down, he scans his cabin - it is small, and cramped. There is a couch, black and white television and the kitchen in one corner. In the other is a single bed, a desk and photos framed on the wall. Some of these photos are of a younger Eduardo during his wartime days, with his platoon buddies. There is also a photo of Eduardo and a beautiful girl. The photo frame on this one is cracked and is held up by tape. Eduardo goes up to the desk and dials on the ancient telephone and waits patiently. We only hear his side of the conversation.
AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
The door creaks open as Eduardo enters. Tired, he drops his walking stick on the ground and limps towards the couch. Plumping himself down, he scans his cabin - it is small, and cramped. There is a couch, black and white television and the kitchen in one corner. In the other is a single bed, a desk and photos framed on the wall. Some of these photos are of a younger Eduardo during his wartime days, with his platoon buddies. There is also a photo of Eduardo and a beautiful girl. The photo frame on this one is cracked and is held up by tape.
AbhinavSinha added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
INT. cut to - int. small wooden cabin - night
AbhinavSinha edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
Eduardo walks up to ALFONS, an old German who is wearing a backpack and carrying a walking stick. He is just about to leave when he sees Eduardo.
AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
The boy is still in the same position he was. Eduardo is now up in his watch tower, scanning through his notes. He occasionally looks down to look at the boy. The boy decides to get up; but does so after giving the tunnel one last look. He looks up at Eduardo, waves sadly, and leaves.
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AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
The boy smiles faintly and shakes his head; his eyes never leave the tunnel.
AbhinavSinha added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
eduardo
What? This is called a tunnel, boy. Now run along before your parents get worried.
AbhinavSinha edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
The boy looks at him, says nothing, and then points to the tunnel. Eduardo looks - the tunnel is empty.
AbhinavSinha added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/21/2009 [view]
The boy looks at him, says nothing, and continues to
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