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This is your first scene. Last edited by gnevins, on 11/04/2014. 0 comments. More scene info.

In a land far far away. deep in the forrest was a cottage overgrown with plants and flowers. inside there lived a beautiful woman with a secret. a secret that had forced her into the woods to be labeled the witch of the forrest.

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Tommy

This sounds boooooorrrrringgggg!!

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Grandpa

It is.

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Tommy

So, why are you reading it to me Grandpa?

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Grandpa

Hoping you will fall asleep faster.

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Tommy

I definitely hate you...

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Grandpa

Ok, fine. I'll liven it up...

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THE BEAUTIFUL WOMAN'S NAME WAS MARGARET. SHE WAS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMAN IN THE LAND. BUT SHE HAD SECRET, UNEXPLAINABLE POWERS.

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MARGARET

(Skipping through the field in an old village type of dress and basket filled with Daisies. She picks the last flower and continues skipping to her home.) I'm home Papa!

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Dale

My darling, you look as beautiful as ever. Did you have a good day?

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MARGARET

I did Papa. I also picked some flowers for the dinner table.

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Dale

Lovely. Put them in some water. (He kisses her forehead) I've got to leave after dinner tonight-

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CUT TO A QUIET DINNER WITH THE DAISIES IN THE MIDDLE OF THE TABLE.

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SUDDENLY THERE IS A LOUD BANG AT THE DOOR AND SOLDIERS COME BARGING IN.

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SOLDIER 1

Dale Frinzu? You are arrested for treason.

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Dale

On what grounds (Lets out a scared laugh) This has to be some kind of misunderstanding.

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Margaret

Papa!(Soldier 2 is handcuffing Dale)

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Dale

Honey, don't worry.

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Margaret

Let go of him! (She goes to push him and has more strength than she has ever known before. Soldier 2 flies across the room)

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Soldier 1

What are you?

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Margaret

(looking down at her hands in disbelief) I...I don't know...but you better stay away.

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Soldier 2

(Regaining his composure) Bloody hell we will. You both are going to be spending the rest of your days behind bars.

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Dale

What are you doing Margaret?

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Margaret

I don't know...

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DALE

Well STOP it before you get us killed.

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Margaret

I don't know how...

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