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lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013. lauram95 made 34 other changes.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
Shut up lets just go.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
YOu are such a pessimist
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
Till tomorrow
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
Home sweet home
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Henry and Jill leave the clearing. They walk through the forest and come to a small cabin.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
I hope so
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HEnry
Don't worry, We'll be ok.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
JIll
I know. It's just, we've never even been out of town before.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
We have to before she notices him missing
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
JIll
I cant believe we are doing this
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
We need to get back to the cabin and we take the next flight tomorrow morning.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
JIll
So where to next?
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
You're right
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
You know she's going to need the obvious
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
That's too obvious
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Jill gives him the box and a piece of paper. He covers it in plastic wrap and drops it in the hole. They both fill the hole back up with the dirt. Jill places an odd looking blue rock over the dirt where the box is hidden.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
Yes. Hand me the box
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
Alright then. Are you done
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
We'll be fine. She doesn't need to know anything more anyways. I don't want her to know too much.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
Are you sure. Shes going to read this someday if we don't make it.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
No.
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Jill gives the note to Henry and she studies it quietly for a minute before handing it back
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
JILL
Is there anything you want to add to this note>
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Henry takes a shovel and starts digging a hole by a tree. Jill takes out a pen and starts writing a note.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
HENRY
Hand me the shovel I'll get started while you finish that
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Jill
Look we are miles away from any road. Lets just hide this and go okay? The sun is going to set on us if we dont go.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
Henry
You never know who could be out here.
lauram95 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/08/2013 [view]
JILL
No one is here. Relax
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The establishing shot showing the small clearing and a YOUNG GIRL entering with a backpack and a small box.
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An empty secluded part of a forest. Small sounds of squirrels and leaves rustling. Some birds chirping in the distance and footsteps approaching.
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EXT. FOREST - NIGHT
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TITLE CARD: "THE EMPTY FOREST"
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INT. FADE in:
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