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Tom, a late 20's horsebreaker is drinking alone at a pub in a outback town near the top end of Australia. He is having flashbacks to his brothers fight over the paternity of his wifes baby and hisbrothers freak accident that leads to his death.
In come Burt a truck driver and an angryhooker called Mag trying to get her payment from him.
Burt is violent and disrespectful towards women and Mag dosn't know when to keep her mouth shut. After relentlessly hounding her he eventually chokes her and knocks her out throwing her body like a ragdoll to the floor. Tom goes to check on the girl and can't find a pulse. He confronts Burt and the two get into an altercation with tom eventually smasking a glss beer pitcher over Toms face and beating him to death until the police arrive. We end withseeing an old man in jail and have a close up on his eyes and realize that it's Tom. Last shot is simple gravestones on a hill with their names inscribed.

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heloise edited an action in "Pub" two years ago. more
Bubbles fade into flashback.
heloise edited an action in "Pub" two years ago. more
Close up of the bubles as credits roll.
heloise added a slugline in "Jail" two years ago. heloise made 1 other comment and 93 other changes. more
INT. iNSIDE A QUIET JAIL CELL WE SEE AN OLD MAN REFLECTING WITH HIS EYES SHUT. ZOOM INTO HIS FACE AND HE OPEND HIS EYES WITHAJOLT AND WEREALIZE THEY ARE TOMS EYES.
 

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