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Scene 1. Last edited by JamesMacimurray, on 03/06/2012. 2 comments. More scene info.

Black

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F. Fade In

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Ext. small house - Day

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screen door is banging gently from slight breeze.

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s. zoom in to house

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mumbling is heard from within, mumbling gets louder. becomes yelling. louder and louder.

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lamp is thrown through the front window.

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Valentin bangs through front door rolling.

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side shot of house front door

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Valentin stumbles to front lawn. Nekole follows and stands in front door way.

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roof shot down

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Valentin stumbling further on the lawn and falling.

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Over shoulder to Valentin

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Valentin

Come on baby, calm down. It's gonna be alright.

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Front bust Nekole

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Nekole

I am going to KILL you, you... you motha FUCKA!

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profile Valentin

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Valentin

Eek, babe, come on. This stuff happens all the time to people.

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front bust Nekole

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she is silent staring at him. a glaze of curiosity in her eyes.

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front full Valentin

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he starts to raise himself up with one hand. the other holds his gut.

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close up side lip Nekole

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close up front face valentin

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cloes up side lip nekole

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close up front face valentin

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his eyes begin to enlarge.

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close up side lip nekole

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a few beats of continued stillness. her lip begins to quiver.

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close up eyes valentin

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his eyes bulge.

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valentin (CONT'D)

oh...no...

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front full nekole f. zoom out to full

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Nekole flips knife and throws professionally at Valentin with scream.

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cut to black

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sound of knife piercing flesh.

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Valentin

shit! Oooh!

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int. house - day

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old couple are sitting at a breakfast table facing each other. they are eating soup. James slurps some of his soup.

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james

mmmm! Delish-(beat) Darling?

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he holds his spoon close to his mouth and stares at her.

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james (CONT'D)

Darling? (beat) Darling?

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he is still staring. Terri is eating focused on the flowers in the center of the table.

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james

TERRI!

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she slowly looks up at him.

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james (CONT'D)

Terri! What in heavens good graces are you doing googly eye'n the tulips!

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Terri

Did you hear them today? They were sure winding something up fierce.

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james

What is so great about them anyways? You get so infatuated with these damn plants! Look here, they are wilting. Throw em out I say!

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Terri

Yep. Something Fierce. Worst I have heard yet. Wouldn't you agree James?

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james

Anymore soup left? I haven't yet gotten my fill.

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James stands and goes to the kitchen to fill his bowl.

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Terri

I hope they are alright. She does seem like a nice girl. I knew it wouldn't work out from the beginning you know. She is too asian for a... um... a....

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james

Caucasian.

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terri

Yes. A Caucasian.

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the tulips catch fire. both Terri and James stare at them without emotion.

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james

Damn things. Throw them out I say...

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ext. residential street - day

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Harvy is pacing back and forth on the sidewalk. James then enters street through a gate.

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james

Hey there Harv.

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Harvy

Hey Jim.

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james

James.

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Harvy

Late. Always late.

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james

What's late Harv?

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Harvy

The things you need when you need them Jim. Always late.

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james

James.

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Harvy

Tasks grow on you Jim, you need tools to cut the troubles down. Either that or take a metal baseball bat to your cranium, or anybody else's for that matter. Which ever comes first. Thats the skull you see. To their head. WHACK! WHACK!

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james

James. So got a new mower comin in today aye? Well. You have a good day Harv.

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Harvy

I never saw so much blood.

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Valentin and Nekole walk past Harvy through gate. Harvy turns his head.

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Harvy (CONT'D)

Never so much. Never born. Never die.

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Harvy's nose begins to bleed.

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otherside of gate pan back

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Valentin and Nekole laughing with one another walking up the path.

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Valentin

Hey. Do it again.

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Nekole

What? Do what?

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Valentin

Come on Neeks, you know. What you did earlier. In the parking lot.

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nekole

Shoot up? Give me some and I shall comense master!

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she salutes him.

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Valentin

No babe, with the bum... You were hysterical!

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he begins to make motions of beating the ground with a bat.

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Valentin (CONT'D)

Ahh! Stop it! It hurts! HAHAHAHA!

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nekole slaps him across the face

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Valentin stops laughing and looks at her fiercely. She grabs his face and they kiss. Harvy is seen in the background runnning around happy with a lawn mower over his head.

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