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Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. Huyphamvo made 224 other changes.
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
She exits. Black out.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Cynthia
Dinner is ready.
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
The door stage left slams shut by itself. Scotty goes down stage. He stares at the audience, panting for a while. Then Cynthia enters through the door stage right.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Why me?
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
The record starts playing jazz again. Scotty looks delirious. He throws the record on the ground. He sits back on the couch with his eyes closed. He breathes in and out for a while, hyperventilating. Then out of a poster above the couch comes a hand that grabs Scotty's face. Scotty screams. Scotty tears the poster off, but there's no hole in the wall.
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
There's a beat then a three gun shots. Scotty listening jumps up.
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
The record starts playing
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
D
Sorry Scotty.
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
There's a beat then a three gun shots.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
D
That's good to hear.
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Scotty
Well uh, I won't need to re-up for a couple weeks, but I've gotten a lot of compliments on this new strain.
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Scotty
Did you not read the sign on my door? No Soliciting.
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D
I'm just doing a little door to door sales today.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Fa Sho'
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D
I gotta keep wraps on all my clients. You feel me?
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
I'm fine. Still got half from what you sold me last month. How do you know where I live?
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D
I'm good Scotty. How you doing on supplies?
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Hey, what's good D?
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He stands up and almost is pulling his hair out. He takes off the record for the record player and puts on a new one. Some jazz plays then theres voices playing on the record. It's his conversation between Scotty and D.
Huyphamvo edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
D
That's good to hear.
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He stands up and almost is pulling his hair out. He takes off the record for the record player and puts on a new one. Some jazz plays then theres voices playing on the record.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
What is going on?
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He drops the carton.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Ah! God!
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He stands up and slams the door. He goes to the couch and sits down. Scotty runs his fingers through his hair and takes out the tipper ware of weed and rolls a blunt. He lights it and takes a hit. He starts coughing violently he dropped the blunt on the table and coughs into his hands. Theres blood on his hands. He rubs the blood on his shirt. He lays back with his eyes closed. He sits back up and grabs a box of cookie crisps from under the coffee table. He pours out the cereal into the bowl then he grabs a carton of milk. He pours the carton and ash falls out.
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Scotty
Shit, I'm sorry. I uh, I fucked up. I had a time of weakness
(long beat)
You don't deserve that excuse. Like I had a some kind of weakness, like I was seduced, like I had some kind of strong moral fiber beforehand. I'm not a good guy. Cynthia! Please answer me!
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He stands up and slams the door. He goes to the couch and sits down. Scotty runs his fingers through his hair and takes out the tipper ware of weed and rolls a blunt. He lights it and takes a hit. He starts coughing violently he dropped the blunt on the table and coughs into his hands. Theres blood on his hands. He rubs the blood on his shirt.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Shit, I'm sorry. I uh, I fucked up. I had a time of weakness
(long beat)
You don't deserve that excuse. Like I had a some kind of weakness, like I was seduced, like I had some kind of strong moral fiber before. I'm not a good guy. Cynthia! Please answer me!
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He kicks at the wall some more, but no cigar. He sits his back against the wall.
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He kicks at the wall some more, but no cigar.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Did you find out or something? Huh Cynthia?
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He goes back to the door stage right.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
(laughs)
What?!
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He runs to the other door stage left and jumps to kick it. He falls down.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
scotty
Cynthia!
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He bangs on the wall.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
What the fuck?! CYNTHIA! CYNTHIA!
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He pushes against the brick wall, but it's solid. He kicks it, but it is definitely a brick wall. He runs to the other door. He opens it easily, but there's another brick wall.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
What the- is this some kind of joke?
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He tries again, but this time with a foot against the wall. He pulls with all his strength and his face reddens as he hustles to open the door. The door opens. There is a brick wall in the opening of the door. Scotty looks incredibly confused.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty
Fuck.
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He puts the trash bag down and uses two hands to pull on the knob. But hurts his hands as they slip off.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty (angry)
What the fuck?
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
He gets more aggressive with the knob.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty (confused)
What the-
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Cynthia leaves through the door stage right. Scotty stands up and stretches. He picks up the blunt and finishes it. He puts out the roach in the ash tray. Scotty puts the scale in the tupperware. He picks up all the little nugs and crumbs and puts it into the bag. He puts the bag into the tupper ware and the tupper ware under the coffee table. He picks up the ash tray and carries it over to the trash can. He dumps out all the contents and places it back on to the table. He ties up the trash bag and attempts to open the door to outside stage left. The door is locked.
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Cynthia leaves through the door stage right. Scotty stands up and stretches. He picks up the blunt and finishes the roach
Huyphamvo added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Cynthia leaves through the door stage right.
Huyphamvo added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Cynthia
Love you.
Huyphamvo edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Scotty looks shocked. Cynthia gets up from his lap, kisses him.
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