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Rivera
Nobody wil stop me, i'll be
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Sam
You wont shoot us in such a crowded area. You're bluffing.
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Rivera
Pardon me?
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Sam
No.
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Rivera
You're stubborn, it wont serve you well where you're going. Alright, lets go. i have a boat waiting outside, and if you try to resist, i'll shoot your wife, then you Sam. So just make this easy-
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Rivera
You're stubborn, it wont serve you well where you're going.
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Sam
Manners will get you everywhere
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rivera
Then how does this sound? give me your research, and ill kill you both quickly and painlessly. Otherwise i take your wife, and torture her until you give me what i want.
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rivera
Then how does this sound? give me your research, and ill kill you both quickly and painlessly. Otherwise
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Sam
well, lets run through out options. Option one: We give you all our work, and you kill us. Option two: we give you nothing, and see how far our luck continues to carry us. The second one seems much more appealing to me.
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Rivera
You've been very lucky so far.
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Remi
After all we've been through together, you still think we're that gullible?
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Rivera
That's sad, i was just going to say that if you gave me your research I would tell my boss I killed you, avoiding the whole messy business altogether.
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Remi
Either way, we're not going to help you find your dirty little secret.
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Rivera
I can have that arranged.
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Sam
We seem to keep running into each other, and frankly, its something we could do without.
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Rivera
Hello Fargos.
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The DOCENT walks off, SAM and REMI begin to look around, trying to find any evidence that the Shenandoah
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Docent
Hmm, that's odd. Must be an administrative error. Feel free to wander around, ill try to sort this out.
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Docent
Hmm, that's odd. Must be an administrative error.
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Remi
Thirteen. You mentioned fourteen ships, there are only thirteen ships listed here.
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Docent
I beg your pardon?
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Remi
There are only thirteen
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Docent
Here we are. Officially there were fourteen large ships in the Strait on that day, all of which were relatively easy to find due to insurance claims
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The DOCENT leads them to an alcove in the museum, called "The Maritime Effects"
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Docent
Of course, we have an alcove dedicated to that purpose.
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SAM
Yes. We're particularly interested in ships that might have been anchored in the Strait at the time of the Krakatoa explosion.
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SAM
We're particularly interested in ships that might have been anchored in the Strait at the time of the Krakatoa explosion.
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SAM and REMI enter the Museum to find out about the missing shop they're looking for. They begin wandering about the Museum looking for evidence.
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Docent
May i help you two with anything?
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INT. INT. KRAKATAU MUSEUM, SUNDARA STRAIGHT
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REMI swims over to the side of the boat, begins to climb on board.
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Sam
We'll cross that bridge when we come to it...
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remi
And if there's a party waiting for us?
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Sam
We drive up, ask for it nicely, then take it from them.
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Remi
Plan?
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Sam
Either way, we have to go get that bell.
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Sam
And if theres
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Remi
We drive up, ask for it nicely, then take it from them.
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Sam
Either way, we have to go get that bell. Plan?
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Remi
Would you believe me if i told you i learned that off Home and Garden television?
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Sam stared at her dumfounded.
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SAM takes the semi-automatic pistol from RIVERA'S body, and hands it to REMI. She examines it for a few moments, then swiftly ejects the magazine, checks the load, and slides it back into place, flipping on the safety,
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sam
Sleeping, and not going to be very happy when he wakes up.
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Remi (nodding to rivera)
Is he...
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Sam
I guess my pageant days are over
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Remi
Your face...
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