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Jackalai added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012. Jackalai made 31 other changes.
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Kevin
I'm about to make something disappear. Do you happen to have a five dollar bill...?
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Kevin smiles.
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BRANDON
I'm not afraid of anything!
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Brandon forces his way up on to the "stage" and stands defiantly in front of Kevin.
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KEVIN (9) watches BRANDON (10) walk away with his lunch money. He rubs his stomach, where he received a vicious kick moments earlier. He collects the scattered objects that fell from his Jr. Magician Magic Kit: wands, cards, cups, etc.
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BRANDON
(walking away)
Thanks for the five bucks!
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Kevin
And now, ladies and gentlemen, for my final illusion. I will need a volunteer who's not afraid of anything.
Jackalai added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
Kevin
And now, ladies and gentlemen, for my final illusion. I will need a volunteer who's not afraid of anything.
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The bully Brandon and some of his cronies push their way to the front of the crowd, sneers on their faces.
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END MONTAGE:
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Various shots of Kevin's magic performance.
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Kids laughing and having a good time.
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Kevin choosing volunteers.
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Kids gathering together.
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Kevin standing up on an overturned ball-box, shouting to the kids on the playground.
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After a long moment, Kevin raises his head, a hopeful look on his face. Sarah looks at him expectantly. He stands up and pulls his magician's wand out of his pocket.
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BEGIN MONTAGE:
Jackalai added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
After a long moment, Kevin raises his head, a hopeful look on his face. Sarah looks at him expectantly. He stands up.
Jackalai inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
His walking-buddy SARAH (9) puts her hand on his shoulder and tries to comfort him. He recoils and moves away.
Jackalai edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
KEVIN (9) watches BRANDON (10) walk away with his lunch money. He rubs his stomach, where he received a vicious kick moments earlier. He collects the scattered objects that fell from his Jr. Magician Magic Kit: wands, cards, cups, etc. His walking-buddy SARAH (9) puts her hand on his shoulder and tries to comfort him. He recoils and moves away.
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Kevin sits down on the steps and rests his head in his hands. Sarah sits next to him, not sure what to do.
Jackalai added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
Kevin sits down on the steps and rests his head in his hands.
Jackalai added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
Kevin
She didn't believe me.
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A minute later Kevin comes out the door and out onto the playground. Sarah walks up to him.
Jackalai added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/08/2012 [view]
Sarah plays with other kids at recess. She looks into the window and sees Kevin talking to a teacher inside the classroom. Kevin's head is hung down, defeated.
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INT. Ext. school playground -day
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They walk the rest of the way to school, with Kevin a few steps in front of Sarah.
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KEVIN (9) walks to school, side by side with ELAINE (9), the girl from down the block. As they pass by a particular house, they both pick up their pace.
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KEVIN (9) walks to school, side by side with ELAINE (9), the girl from down the block.
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INT. ext. suburban street -morning
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