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Quick pitch

Val and his crew of mercenaries - aboard the Tranquility - are transporting cargo the Syndicate desperately wants. It seems like a simple job - hand over the cargo - get paid.

But things become more complicated when the crew encounters a meteor storm on route to the rendezvous point. The rocky ride breaks a seal on one of the cargo pods, setting off an alarm. The crew open the pod and discover that the cargo they are carrying is human! The other pod is forcibly opened, revealing yet another person.

Once the two become conscious, they tell their story to Val and company.
One is a physicist; the other - his wife - a surgeon. The Syndicate has nefarious plans for both, which the two cannot abide by...and neither can Val's crew once they become privy to the details.

Val and crew debate what to do but eventually decide not to turn the two over to the Syndicate. Now they are on the run from the unsavory cartel's most ruthless bounty hunter - Miscov.

Project Type: Short Film (30 min)

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Recent changes

eroc57 added dialogue in "Human Cargo" a year ago. eroc57 made 3 other changes. more
VAl
Ugh...this day just keeps gettin' better an' better.
eroc57 edited an action in "...and Autumn" a year ago. more
Nika and Jeb settle back into their chairs with Jeb sporting that famous scowl once again.
eroc57 edited dialogue in "Calm before the Storm" a year ago. eroc57 made 43 other changes. more
val
How long 'til we reach the rendezvous point with the Syndicate rep?
eroc57 edited dialogue in "The Negotiation" a year ago. eroc57 made 144 other changes. more
gonzo
The Captain knows this piece o' work?
eroc57 added dialogue in "Meet Sergio...and Autumn" a year ago. eroc57 made 187 other changes. more
jeb
Bet there's a hot babe in the other pod.
 

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