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sladetcb edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 2 months ago. more
Pastor David
Hmmm. Though a tragic story of how sin can and did destroy a young man's life, what I find most interesting is the manner of which you told the story.
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trayler
sniff, I said. I can smell the alcohol and cigarettes sweating out your pores and saturating your clothes.And, Besides that cheap cologne you used in hopes of masking the smell, I myself, am very familiar with wreaking of whiskey and smokes as the sun begins to rise on a new day. but, I digress. Since you haven't had time to bath and change clothes, then I deduce that you wouldn't have had time to wash off the blood, that from looking at the violent crime scene, i know you would be covered in. One bit of advice, next time you're running out the door and you have to cover up the last night's pervasions, try spraying a bit of that cheap cologne in your mouth too. It smells like butt.
sladetcb added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago. sladetcb made 9 other changes. more
trayler
sniff, I said. I can smell the alcohol and cigarettes covered up with cheap cologne all over you.
sladetcb edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 3 months ago. sladetcb made 14 other changes. more
Pastor David
Well, If memory serves me correctly, I believe the sad tale that you described actually took place 4 or 5 years ago. But...by the bitterness in your voice, I would swear the pain is as fresh as if it happened yesterday.
 

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