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scene 3 Last edited by nohemirz1, on 05/19/2014. 0 comments. More scene info.

nohemi is by herself in the car, daisy and gaby are passed out it is raining hard outside.

nohemirz1 - on 05/19/2014 2 versions.

Nohemi:

For the sake of saving my party going privilege I need to get rid of this deer. I'm going to regret this, but I'm bringing it inside the car.

nohemirz1 - on 05/19/2014 2 versions.

Nohemi goes towards the deer and picks it up to put it inside the car.

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Nohemi: (CONT'D)

Gosh i knew i should've brought the mini van now i have to cram the stupid deer next to daisy.

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 2 versions.

Nohemi struggles to get the deer inside the car. The deer casually hangs on nohemi's back. It begins to rain very hard.

d2ibarra - on 05/19/2014 4 versions.

Nohemi: (CONT'D) (CONT'D)

Oh no I really didn't want this to happen! Umm ok let me see, what i'm going to do uh let me see where did gaby leave the dumb keys hmmm

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 3 versions.

Nohemi finds the keys and puts them in the car the car begins to drive itself as gaby's fainted foot is pressing the pedal, Nohemi begins to freak out.

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NOhemi: (CONT'D) (CONT'D

Oh my goodness! what am I going to do? This is the end of me this really is, I can't see anything this stupid deer just won't get off my shoulders and now....

gabysbeastie - on 05/19/2014 3 versions.

Nohemi reaches the edge of a cliff and begins to panic. Suddenly a strange huntsman appears.

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Nohemi (crying):

I'm at the edge of a cliff. It's over. What have I gotten myself into?!

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Hunter March:

Well, well, well what do we have here?

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Nohemi stares at hunter march as hunter walks around and inspects the car.

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Hunter march: (CONT'D)

So let me guess, that deer didn't just magically decide to sit on your back seat, did it? And a few minutes ago your friends didn't passed out, did they?

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NohemI:

Who are you and how do you know all of this?

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Hunter march:

The name's March, Hunter March, but I go by Hunter. I am the man you would never imagine in your worst nightmare, I am the man that watches you as you sleep, the one who knows your every move at all times...

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Nohemi:

Santa Claus? What the even heck! This is not funny. I don't have time for jokes!

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Hunter march

In all seriousness my name is Hunter and I was summonsed by a higher power. When the forces of nature are disturbed at the darkest hour I am born. I come to judge you and to curse you. In other words your fate is up to me. So to make a long story short if I were you I'd start treating me with more respect.

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 4 versions.

Nohemi:

Okay, I'm sorry but I'm freaking out I have a dead deer and two unconscious friends and if it weren't for you standing here I would have fallen of this cliff.

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Hunter march:

What do you think was your biggest mistake tonight?

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Nohemi:

Everything.

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Hunter march:

No, tell me your biggest mistake.

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 2 versions.

Nohemi:

Well for starters I should have never run over that stupid deer because that was the cause of this entire misfortune and now....

gabysbeastie - on 05/19/2014 2 versions.

Hunter March:

No no no my dear, your mistake has a deeper root. There is something that surged all this trouble, something that lead you to run over the deer. I need you to realize what that was so that you can make amends for your mistakes.

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 4 versions.

Nohemi:

Well, in all honesty all animals are beautiful and their lives are as precious as human lives. Look even those raccoons that seem disgusting have a purpose for existence and should be appreciated. I was selfish and dumb, I regret what I did because this deer that I carry on back was a precious life.

nohemirz1 - on 05/19/2014

Hunter mArch:

well, this turned out surprisingly well. Usually it takes about twenty more minutes of debating before I finally get someone to agree with me. I am pleased to see that you understand what you've done wrong, and I hope you're ready to face the punishment for your crime.

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 3 versions.

Nohemi:

What do you mean? I don't understand. A punishment?

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Hunter march:

Like all forces in nature the disturbance of one must be amended by the establishment of equilibrium. You my dear, disturbed the peace of one of the most passive and great forces of nature. That poor deer was a member of a family and you ripped it apart from its roots therefore causing a disturbance.

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Nohemi stares at hunter as she is intrigued by what he says. Hunter begins to get closer to Nohemi

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Hunter march:(CONT'D)

So this is how it all goes down. You wish to live I'm sure?

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nohemi:

Im not sure if I should take that as a threat or a mere question...

gabysbeastie - on 05/19/2014 3 versions.

Hunter march:

Enough with the witty remarks, just answer my question!

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Nohemi:

Yes I would

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Hunter march:

I have a bit of a modest proposal for you. You have just confirmed that you wish to live, while I on the other hand would like nothing more than a break from this miserable life of punishment so here is how it all goes down. You have made a terrible mistake but you're not the only one. Now for your punishment: The weight of the deer is something that will physically burden you for the rest of your life and that is a simple consequence of life. On top of that, to prevent others from making the same mistake, you will roam the fraternities and sorority's and you will wait for them to have mixers and parties and formals and semi formals. And each time there is a social event, you will stand outside of the party and you will tell the tale of your unfortunate event and warn others of the mistakes you have made so that they may walk away from you as wiser people. Am I making myself clear?

gabysbeastie - on 05/22/2014 5 versions.

Nohemi:

I understand what I have done and I agree just get me out of there and let me go.

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Hunter March:

I believe this is the key you were searching for? Now take it, and drive away from here in exactly five minutes, the rain will be gone and you will be safe but you must not forget your punishment for it is the only thing assuring your survival.

gabysbeastie - on 05/19/2014 2 versions.

Hunter march leaves Nohemi waits in the rain for five minutes as the scene ends.

gabysbeastie - on 05/19/2014

Flashback to the curent frat party

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