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Hunter march:
I have a bit of a modest proposal for you. You have just confirmed that you wish to live, while I on the other hand would like nothing more than a break from this miserable life of punishment so here is how it all goes down. You have made a terrible mistake but you're not the only one. Now for your punishment: The weight of the deer is something that will physically burden you for the rest of your life and that is a simple consequence of life. On top of that, to prevent others from making the same mistake, you will roam the fraternities and sorority's and you will wait for them to have mixers and parties and formals and semi formals. And each time there is a social event, you will stand outside of the party and you will tell the tale of your unfortunate event and warn others of the mistakes you have made so that they may walk away from you as wiser people. Am I making myself clear?
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Hunter march:(CONT'D)
So this is how it all goes down. You wish to live I'm sure?
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Nohemi stares at hunter as she is intrigued by what he says. Hunter begins to get closer to Nohemi
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Hunter begins to get closer to Nohemi
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Hunter march:
I hope you understand what i am saying and i hope that it is not too troublesome for you to follow along but let me just clarify myself. This would not be the first time an incident of these sorts occurs. You would not believe the ignorant choices many of your sorority sisters have made when driving back from a frat party. Now i have tried different punishments before, you know to change people for the better but very few have worked.
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Hunter march:
I have a bit of a modest proposal for you. You have just confirmed that you wish to live, while I on the other hand would like nothing more than a break from this miserable life of punishment so here is how it all goes down. You have made a terrible mistake and so have many others before you and so will many others after you. The weight of the deer is something that will physically burden you for the rest of your life and that is a simple consequence of life. On the other hand to prevent others from making the same mistake, you will roam the fraternities and sorority's and you will wait for them to have mixers and parties and formals and semi formals. And each time there is a social event, you will stand outside of the party you were not invited and you will tell the tale of your unfortunate event and warn others of the mistakes you have made so that they may walk away from you as wiser people than they were before speaking to you. Am I making myself clear?
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Nohemi:
What do you mean? I don't understand. A punishment?
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Hunter mArch:
well, this turned out surprisingly well. Usually it takes about twenty more minutes of debating before I finally get someone to agree with me. I am pleased to see that you understand what you've done wrong, and I hope you're ready to face the punishment for your crime.
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Hunter March:
No no no my dear, your mistake has a deeper root. There is something that surged all this trouble, something that lead you to run over the deer. I need you to realize what that was so that you can make amends for your mistakes.
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Hunter march
In all seriousness my name is Hunter and I was summonsed by a higher power. When the forces of nature are disturbed at the darkest hour I am born. I come to judge you and to curse you. In other words your fate is up to me. So to make a long story short if I were you I'd start treating me with more respect.
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Nohemi:
Santa Claus? What the even heck! This is not funny. I don't have time for jokes!
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Hunter march:
The name's March, Hunter March, but I go by Hunter. I am the man you would never imagine in your worst nightmare, I am the man that watches you as you sleep, the one who knows your every move at all times...
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Nohemi: (CONT'D)
Oh no I really didn't want this to happen! Umm ok let me see, what i'm going to do uh let me see where did gaby leave the dumb keys hmmm
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Nohemi: (CONT'D)
Gosh i knew i should've brought the mini van now i have to cram the stupid deer next to daisy.
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Hunter march:
No, tell me your biggest mistake.
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Hunter march
In all seriousness my name is Hunter and I am summonsed by a higher power. When the forces of nature are disturbed at the darkest hour I am born. I come to judge you or to curse you. In other words your fate is up to me. So to make a long story short if I were you I would start treating me with more respect.
gabysbeastie edited dialogue in "scene 3" on 05/22/2014 [view]
Nohemi:
Santa Claus? What the even heck! This is not funny I don't have time for jokes!
gabysbeastie edited dialogue in "scene 3" on 05/22/2014 [view]
Hunter march:
The name's March, Hunter March, but I go by hunter. I am the man you would never imagine in your worst nightmare, I am the man that watches you as you sleep, the one who knows your every move at all times...
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Hunter march: (CONT'D)
So let me guess, that deer didn't just magically decide to sit on your back seat, did it? And a few minutes ago your friends didn't passed out, did they?
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