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man wakes up in house, investigates house, dies in house

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screenplayedkyle edited an action in "Living room (night)" a year ago. screenplayedkyle made 2 other changes. more
Protagonist is suddenly startled from the sudden static from the TV that shines very bright on his face. So he leans to his left to grab the remote off the couch *(or it on the table with deja vu to the viewer) but it isn't there, instead back on the table. He thinks about for a quick second but then shrugs it off and leans forward to grab the remote off the table and turns off the TV. When he leans back onto the couch; we see his face take up half of the shot and the other half has a silhouette of the ANTAGONIST starring at him for a little while the protagonist rests. The silhouette then proceeds to his right and right as he leaves the shot, something falls and makes a sound from the fall. The protagonist looks in the direction that the sound came from and gets off the couch to see what it was. As he gets closer to the object, we see that a flashlight fell off the dinning room table. The protagonist picks it up and examines it before turning it on to see what could have made it fall off the the table. we see a shadow walk by on the wall leading up to the stairs. The protagonist quickly looks towards that direction with his flash light and proceeds towards that way. As he slowly walks straight and around the corner; his flashlight tracks to the corner and up the stairs around it. We see from the top of the stairs; the protagonist stop in front of the steps and examine the top.
screenplayedkyle edited an action in "Living room (first floor) (day) *" a year ago. more
When he reach the inside of the house, the camera pans him walk into the dinning room to put his jacket away as we slowly track towards the couch and then stop in a long shot of him sitting onto the couch. He reaches from the couch and grabs the remote on the coffee table to turn on the TV. The room fills with light and the soothing voice of a man talks on the TV as the protagonist throws the remote to the left side of him on the couch. While he watches TV, we start to move towards his face as he yawns and leans his head back while slowly closes his eyes. We stop after he has fully closed his eyes and as the finally sentence is said by the man on the TV, we cut to.
screenplayedkyle edited an action in "Living room (night)" a year ago. screenplayedkyle made 3 other changes. more
Protagonist is suddenly startled from the sudden static from the TV that shines very bright on his face. So he leans to his left to grab the remote off the couch (or table with deja vu to the viewer) but it isn't there, but back on the table. He thinks about for a quick second but then shrugs it off and leans forward to grab the remote off the table and turns off the TV. When he leans back onto the couch; we see his face take up half of the shot and the other half has a silhouette of the ANTAGONIST starring at him for a little while the protagonist rests. The silhouette then proceeds to his right and right as he leaves the shot, something falls and makes a sound from the fall. The protagonist looks in the direction that the sound came from and gets off the couch to see what it was. As he gets closer to the object, we see that a flashlight fell off the dinning room table. The protagonist picks it up and examines it before turning it on to see what could have made it fall off the the table. we see a shadow walk by on the wall leading up to the stairs. The protagonist quickly looks towards that direction with his flash light and proceeds towards that way. As he slowly walks straight and around the corner; his flashlight tracks to the corner and up the stairs around it. We see from the top of the stairs; the protagonist stop in front of the steps and examine the top.
screenplayedkyle edited an action in "Hallway (second floor)" a year ago. screenplayedkyle made 2 other changes. more
We see a shadow through the closing door and when it fully stops, we track to see the protagonist walk up the stairs.) Protagonist reaches the top of the stairs and proceeds into the hallway that has 4 doors. He walks to the center of the hallway and first looks examines the doors to his right with his flashlight. Slowly the door behind him creaks open and he quickly turns around before the door has fully opened; shining his flash light through the opening door. He examines the situation quickly and then proceeds through the open door.
screenplayedkyle edited an action in "Living room (night)" a year ago. screenplayedkyle made 14 other changes. more
Protagonist is suddenly startled from the sudden static from the TV that shines very bright on his face. So he leans to his left to grab the remote off the couch but it isn't there, but back on the table. He thinks about for a quick second but then shrugs it off and leans forward to grab the remote off the table and turns off the TV. When he leans back onto the couch; we see his face take up half of the shot and the other half has a silhouette of the ANTAGONIST starring at him for a little while the protagonist rests. The silhouette then proceeds to his right and right as he leaves the shot, something falls and makes a sound from the fall. The protagonist looks in the direction that the sound came from and gets off the couch to see what it was. As he gets closer to the object, we see that a flashlight fell off the dinning room table. The protagonist picks it up and examines it before turning it on to see what could have made it fall off the the table. As we see him investigate the dinning room, feet pass by the camera. *(or we see a shadow walk by on the wall leading up to the stairs). The protagonist quickly looks towards that direction with his flash light and proceeds towards that way. As he slowly walks straight and around the corner; his flashlight tracks to the corner and up the stairs around it. We see from the top of the stairs; the protagonist stop in front of the steps and examine the top.
 

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