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Brighteyes101 edited an action in "Pulled into the Rock" on 11/05/2009. Brighteyes101 made 89 other changes.
Brighteyes101 edited an action in "Pulled into the Rock" on 11/05/2009 [view]
(She walks close to him and moves the knifes edge down his arm gently, not piercing skin and lightly takes his palm, turning it up to her and peircing his palm, blood pooling from the cut. She starts running itricate lines through his skin as he flinches from pain. She then steps back and presses his hand against a piece of paper, then handing it to Erin behind her. The thing in his hand is a pattern, almost like
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Erin:
*snikers* we had to show the new guy the roaps *gestures a thumb behind his back while still talking* and since your late, we had to get started
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(She walks close to him and moves the knifes edge down his arm gently, not piercing skin and lightly takes his palm, turning it up to her and peircing his palm, blood pooling from the cut. She starts running itricate lines through his skin as he flinches from pain. She then steps back and presses his hand against a piece of paper, then handing it to Erin behind her
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Jenna:
Like i said....no more questions
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Jenna turns the knife point on her finger gently
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Ryan:
Wait, whats going on?
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(Jenna flicks out a knife and two men behind Ryan silently grab his arms. Ryan looks at her in confusion as the bulkyist of the men, pulls his arm up and hits a pressure point behind his shoulder blades releasing the boys hand of his nervous grip)
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Jenna:
Thats also irrelivent. You see your here to listen...not ask questions.
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(Ryan asks confusion in his tone as the camera is panned over his shoulder showing her looking down)
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Ryan:
Why did we have to meet here?
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She walks off from him, the camera pans to her walking to the edge of the cliff looking down
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Ryan:
I herd
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Jenna:
So...Ryan is it? *he voice sorta flows while she speaks* You wanna join our cult? There are rules you know that you must follow. Rule number one *she begins pacing* You must follow all my orders and go with with the flow of the cult the rest of the rules are irrelivent.
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Jenna:
I wouldn't do that *she leans in close* if you wanna be in our group, you dont wanna be seen as the weekling who can't even hold in a spliff.
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Ryan:
Yeah i'm fine....Thanks. I sorta inhailed it to fast
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Jenna:
You alright? *she asks hand on his shoulder as he breaths the air*
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(Jenna pushes Triston aside and walks up to the kid, a spliff on the ground in front of him. Jenna picks up the smoke and throws it off the cliff, pulling the kid to her mouth, and kissing him almost, breathing clean, untainted air into his lungs. The kids chest raises, and she releases him as puff of smoke races out of his lungs, and get carried away with the wind)
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(Jenna pushes Triston aside and walks up to the kid, a spliff on the ground in front of him. Jenna picks up the smoke and throws it off the cliff picking the kid up and kissing his mouth, breathing clean, non-weed filled air into his lungs.)
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Jenna:
Yeah but as i can see no one is really helping him out at the moment.
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Triston:
*snikers* we had to show the new guy the roaps *gestures a thumb behind his back while still talking* and since your late, we had to get started
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Ryan:
But wait....i make up a rule? Why?
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Jenna:
So...Ryan is it? *he voice sorta flows while she speaks* You wanna join our cult? There are rules you know that you must follow. Rule number one *she begins pacing* You must follow all my orders and go with with the flow of the cult, rule number two is yours to make.
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Jenna:
I wouldn't do that *she leans in close* if you wanna be in our group, you dont wanna be seen as a weekling.
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Jenna:
You alright? *she asks hand on his shoulder*
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Triston:
snikers* we had to show the new guy the roaps *gestures a thumb behind his back while still talking* and since your late, we had to get started
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Jenna:
Started without me? Guys i thought you knew better
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Ryan:
Thanks, yeah. I sorta inhailed it to fast
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Jenna:
Don't ask questions *She says while walking by
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Jenna looks down the cliff face
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Jenna: Don't ask questions *she gets close again while walking by* Just do.
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She asks, almost in a joking tone but with a hint of realism and shadow, her hips swaying as she walks up the hill to the high off precipice where her friends are clumped around.
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Started without me? Guys i thought you knew better
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Jenna: Started without me? Guys i thought you knew better
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*snikers* we had to show the new guy the roaps *gestures a thumb behind his back while still talking* and since your late, we had to get started
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Triston: *snikers* we had to show the new guy the roaps *gestures a thumb behind his back while still talking* and since your late, we had to get started
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You alright? *she asks hand on his shoulder*
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Jenna: You alright? *she asks hand on his shoulder*
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Thanks, yeah. I sorta inhailed it to fast
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Ryan: Thanks, yeah. I sorta inhailed it to fast
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(Ryan give a small smile and shrugs)
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Jenna: I wouldn't do that *she leans in close* if you wanna be in our group, you dont wanna be seen as a weekling.
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I wouldn't do that *she leans in close* if you wanna be in our group, you dont wanna be seen as a weekling.
Brighteyes101 edited an action in "Pulled into the Rock" on 11/05/2009 [view]
Jenna: So...Ryan is it? *he voice sorta flows while she speaks* You wanna join our cult? There are rules you know that you must follow. Rule number one *she begins pacing* You must follow all my orders and go with with the flow of the cult, rule number two is yours to make.
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So...Ryan is it? *he voice sorta flows while she speaks* You wanna join our cult? There are rules you know that you must follow. Rule number one *she begins pacing* You must follow all my orders and go with with the flow of the cult, rule number two is yours to make.
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Jenna: Don't ask questions *she gets close again while walking by* Just listen
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Jenna: It proves to the cult that your strong enough to create strength between members.
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Ryan:
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She walks off from him, and the camera pans to his confused face
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(Jenna stares around Triston at the kid coughing his lungs out, when around him people laugh. Jenna pushes Triston aside and walks up to the kid, a spliff on the ground in front of him. Jenna picks up the smoke and throws it off the cliff picking the kid up and kissing his mouth, breathing clean, non-weed filled air into his lungs.)
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She walks off
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