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GeminiEos added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2011. GeminiEos made 5 other changes.
GeminiEos added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2011 [view]
INT. "UNSTABLE"
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He hangs up the phone, and walks slowly away. Towards his car and we hear the sound of a radio broadcaster off camera.
GeminiEos edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2011 [view]
A bloody corpse of a 16-17 year old boy is lying dead on the bus ramp, he's been hit by a bus- so he's pretty banged up. A detective: DAVID HAGGIS is taping an outline of the corpse. HAGGIS is about 50 years old, his psyche has been damaged. He stands at about 5'9.5, and is a former war veteran.
GeminiEos edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2011 [view]
He hangs up the phone, and walks slowly away.
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