Ciao Stranger!

We haven't met yet! Register to start writing screenplays online.

MombasaFilms edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014. MombasaFilms made 30 other changes.
MombasaFilms edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
CUT TO: BLACK
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
CUT TO: BLACK.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
This is the precise moment when the audience is supposed to realize that this man has been the killer all along.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
The guy goes to sit down at his desk. There is a shot of the camera at the front of the desk zooming in on the guy's face until is fully zooms into the guy's eyes.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
The Sgt. smiles as he walks out the door.
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Guy
Yes sir, I will have something for you by this afternoon. Thanks.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
An eerie silence falls in the room. The guy has a shocked look on his face.
MombasaFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
SGT.
This is your first assignment. New evidence just came up in the case of Mr. Call. I need you to look into it for me. Can you do that?
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
SGT.
This is your first assignment. New evidence just came up in the case of Mr. Call. I need you to look into it for me.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
The guy walks over to his desk, the SGT comes up to the side and lets a big manila folder fall to the desk.
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
SGT.
Coffee's in the back, let me know if you need anything.
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Guy
It's very nice, thank you for promoting me, sir.
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
SGT.
Like it?
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
We can see a guy come into the room carrying a box.
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
SGT.
Here's your new office, treat it well now
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Open room. Nobody is in the room. SGT. walks in
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
FADE IN:
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
-----------------------------------------------------------------
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Shots of the crime scene where CALL was killed. Very gruesome. Including pictures from sights where we haven't scene in the back of the actual killers place.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
End Creditsshots of the crime scene where CALL was killed. Very gruesome. Including pictures from sights where we haven't scene in the back of the actual killers place.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Cue MORE AND MORE by WEBB PEIRCE
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
-----------------------------------------------------------------
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
FADE TO BLACK
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
After the shots ring out..
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
***Picture the ending of Reservoir Dogs***
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Many, many shots ring out throughout the place, although we can't see anything happening.
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
local police
3!.....2!.....
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
The camera is facing Call as he let's go of the leg and walks towards the camera. He walks out of the shot, right next to the camera.
MombasaFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
Local police
Come out with your hands up, Mr. Call! You're surrounded! Come out now, peacefully, or we'll take the necessary measures. We're giving you 6 seconds! 6!....5!......4!....
MombasaFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 10/01/2014 [view]
NARRATOR (cALL) o.S
Back in Vietnam, the VC would never bring back their dead. Sometimes they'd just let me lay in the streets of Hue City where I was. Just terrible. But I got over the bodies. The smell. The sight. I just...forgot about them.....I am the Fixer. Plain and simple. Those words echoed in my mind for quite some time. Along with the occasional "Mr. Call", but it was only a matter of time.
繁體中文 | Deutsch | English | Español | Français | suomi | עברית | Italiano | 日本語 | Nederlands | Pirate | Polski | Português | русском | Svenska |