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MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/30/2014. MombasaFilms made 33 other changes.
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Local police
Come out with your hands up, Mr. Call! You're surrounded! We've got all of the evidence to put you away for a long time.
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The killer gets up, and starts to run. Call is left on the ground, almost dead. After a long while, Call starts to get up. He starts to walk towards the Coroner. He starts to drag his friend back to the entrance. You can hear the voices outside of the places.
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Call has been shot in the legs. He is almost immobile.
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The killer grabs call and throws him to the ground. The killer gets on top of Call and starts to choke him. A very intense scene becomes very serious. The fingers tighten around his neck, Call looks blue. The killer lets one hand go.
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Call has been shot in the
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A gunshot echos throughout the place. The killer's eyes widen. Call starts to breathe again.
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Gunshot.
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The killer grabs call and throws him to the ground. The killer gets on top of Call and starts to choke him. A very intense scene becomes very serious. The fingers tighten around his neck, Call looks blue.
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Call gets up. He looks into the killers eyes (all we can see). and runs toward him. The killer tries to punch Call, but he blocks it. Several punches are thrown, but Call blocks most of them. Some hit him in the face. Call is throwing some punches also. Some are connecting.
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Killer
Come on, Detective Call. Is that what they train you to do in the academy?
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The man get's up
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The man picks up Call and they both go down to the floor. Call his getting shots to the torso.
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Call tackles the man, unable to get him down, but at least he get's some shots in on his stomach.
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Call tries to punch the man, but blocks it and get's a shot in Call's gut. His weapon falls to the floor.
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The man does not turn around. Call keeps his gun aimed the guy's head. As Call starts to walk over to the man, the man turns around and before Call can let off a shot, the man grabs his arm. The pain in his side has now come to be.
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call
Slowly turn around. Keep your hands up!
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The man raises his hands. His back is facing Call and the camera.
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Call
Freeze!
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Call looks down. He sees blood on his shirt, down and to the right. He has been stabbed, but is in shock. Call runs to grab the coroners body. There is a man standing over him.
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A body runs out from the side of Call. Call turns and lets out a shot but not before the man grabs his arm and yanks it upwards. The shot echos. The two men fall to the ground. The man gets up and runs in the opposite direction he came, as if running right over Call to keep going. But before Call can grab his gun, the man is out of sight.
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Call looks down. He sees blood on his shirt, down and to the right. He has been stabbed, but is in shock. Call runs to grab the coroners body.
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Call starts to chase the faint echoing voice of the man, until he can hear no more. He is gone.
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Call gets up, very confused about what just happened.
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A body runs out from the side of Call. Call turns and lets out a shot but not before the man grabs his arm and yanks it upwards. The shot echos. The two men fall to the ground. The man gets up and runs in the opposite direction he came, as if running right over Call to keep going. Being Call can grab his gun, the man is out of sight.
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call
You better come out right now with your hands up. I want to see them! This is now a crime scene!
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Silence
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Call
Who's there?
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After a detailed observation of the coroner, Call starts to walk back to his car to call of backup, until a noise pierces the air. It sounds like a metal bucket being dropped.
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Some shots of Call looks around and walking around. Music makes the scene intense. Call runs into a body sprawled out. Call flips the body on it's back. It's the coroner. Call flinches.
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CALL GETS OUT. IT IS JUST HIM. HE TAKES OUT A GUN
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CALL GETS OUT. IT IS JUST HIM.
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CUT TO: CALL DRIVING UP TO THE PLACE
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TITLE
" THE FIXER "
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