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MombasaFilms edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014. MombasaFilms made 20 other changes.
MombasaFilms edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
D.S. WALKS INTO CALLS OFFICE. HE COMES IN SO FAST HE IS STILL HANGING ONTO THE DOORKNOB AS HE CALLS OUT.
MombasaFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
DESK SERGEANT
We have another location. 5th and Bosway. Wanna go check it out?
MombasaFilms edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
POLICE OFFICER WALKS INTO CALLS OFFICE. HE COMES IN SO FAST HE IS STILL HANGING ONTO THE DOORKNOB AS HE CALLS OUT.
MombasaFilms edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
Police Officer
We have another location. 5th and Bosway. Wanna go check it out?
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CUT TO:
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
Shot of Call looking up
MombasaFilms added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CORONER
We have another location. 5th and Bosway. Wanna go check it out?
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CORONER WALKS INTO CALLS OFFICE. HE COMES IN SO FAST HE IS STILL HANGING ONTO THE DOORKNOB AS HE CALLS OUT.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
INT. CALL'S OFFICE
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
FADE IN:
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MombasaFilms edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CUT TO: BLACK
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CUT TO: BLACK.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
SHOT FARTHER AWAY. THEN ANOTHER SHOT REALLY FAR AWAY.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
MIDDLE SHOT OF CALL (WAIST UP)
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CALL LOOKS UP.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
DETECTIVE CALL HAS FOUND A KNIFE THAT APPEARS TO BE CLEAN. BUT THERE IS A SMALL BLOOD STAIN NEAR THE HANDLE.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CALL REACHES HIS HAND UNDER THE SPINNY THING. HE PULLS OUT HIS HAND.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
CALL LOOKS DOWN AND DOES A DOUBLE TAKE AT THE GROUND. WE CAN'T SEE WHAT'S UNDER THE SPINNY THING OR WHATEVER THAT IS IN THE PARK, BUT WE CAN SEE THAT CALL IS CHECKING IT OUT.
MombasaFilms added an action in "This is your first scene." on 09/25/2014 [view]
SHOT OF CALL WALKING UP TO THE NEARBY PLAYGROUND EQUIPMENT.
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