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an injured criminal flees from a botched robbery/home invasion into the woods, where he is tormented by visions and memories of his mistakes as he slowly succumbs to his wounds

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MattofFilm edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
CLOSE SHOT OF ROBBER. He is running down a cul-de-sac, glancing behind as distant sirens slowly grow louder. We follow from the front as he goes, clutching a bloodied tricep and wincing. Eventually, he stops abruptly.
MattofFilm edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. MattofFilm made 13 other changes. more
MEDIUM SHOT of his hand floating. Head and arm are in the background.
MattofFilm edited in "This is your first scene." a year ago. MattofFilm made 31 other changes. more
MattofFilm inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. MattofFilm made 41 other changes. more
MONTAGE OF DRUG WITHDRAWAL SYMPTOMS, CLAUSTROPHOBIC, PANICKED, CLOSE SHOTS.
MattofFilm edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. MattofFilm made 33 other changes. more
LONG SHOT from behind ROBBER and DAD as DAD seizes ROBBER by the shoulders, drags him into the pond, and holds him under the water. ROBBER struggles wildly. DAD suddenly disappears, allowing our POV to see ROBBER'S lifeless body floating further into the water.
 

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