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elleelle edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago. elleelle made 7 other changes. more
Marie
I had a dream about our childhood home.
(beat)
Dad came up the stairs. It was so familiar. Floorboards creaking, his knees cracking. When he came into the bedroom he was so tall he had to duck to fit it the doorway. He nearly filled the whole room. You said to him "Marie went out the window."
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In midmorning, ELLEN comes from the apartment into sunlight. Still, she is tired and slow. Her gaze falls across the street where the laundry mat is being gutted by a few men. Long hoses are fed through windows, machines whir, the men talk to each other over the noise. ELLEN watches and lights a cigarette. One man in particular is the object of her attention. He is dressed in green and works harder than the rest, in silence. Not once do their eyes meet across the street.
elleelle edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago. elleelle made 3 other changes. more
ellen (CONT'D)
You pretend you don't understand what I'm saying.
elleelle edited an action in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago. elleelle made 27 other changes. more
The city is a quietly fuming beast with parallel lines and arches, its movement orchestrated chaotic and gentle. MARIE walks quickly in an alley, distressed but moving in straightforward determined manner like there is a goal to be reached.
elleelle added dialogue in "This is your first scene." 10 months ago. elleelle made 32 other changes. more
ellen (o.s.)
I was waiting at the house.
 

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