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pattersonand edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
Shot jumps to the same scruffy, dirty, beat up looking kid sitting at the counter. He sits there in silence for a bit until the waitress sets down a milkshake in front of him.
pattersonand deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. pattersonand made 14 other changes. more
sheriff(V.O)
You weren't there today with that girl, you didn't sit across the table from her and look into her eyes and see that it was killing her inside because she thought it was her fault. She felt bad for not loving a boy that loved her, you could look in her eyes and see that she hated herself for it. Patrick did everything he could. He tried and he tried and in the end he lost, but at least he tried because these days no one even does that.
pattersonand inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. pattersonand made 41 other changes. more
sheriff(V.O)
You weren't there today with that girl, you didn't sit across the table from her and look into her eyes and see that it was killing her inside because she thought it was her fault. She felt bad for not loving a boy that loved her, you could look in her eyes and see that she hated herself for it. Patrick did everything he could. He tried and he tried and in the end he lost, but at least he tried because these days no one even does that.
pattersonand edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. pattersonand made 53 other changes. more
Shot opens on a pay phone outside the restaurant as the sheriff walks in. He dials and waits. Shot pulls in on his face.
pattersonand edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago. pattersonand made 31 other changes. more
She turns around not knowing what to say and walks away. Patrick Doesn't know what to do so he stands there frozen for a few beats, he then goes back and sits where he was and continues watching the sunset.
 

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