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sharkpoint edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014. sharkpoint made 73 other changes.
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Richie starts back of the stairs leaving Alan in the basement. Alan chugs the rest of his beer and takes a moment to collect himself. He then tosses his empty beer aside and heads back upstairs.
sharkpoint edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
Richie starts back of the stairs leaving Alan in the basement. Alan chugs the rest of his beer and takes a moment to collect himself. He then tosses his beer aside and heads back upstairs.
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Richie takes a swig of his beer, feeling a bit uncomfortable
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Alan breaks out in a huge smile and shoots out a small fist pump. Chugs some of the beer.
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Handing Alan a beer
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Alan and Richie head down the stairs into a finished basement.
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richie
Well.....
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Richie starts back of the stairs leaving Alan in the basement.
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richie
Would you just relax! It's going to be great. Trust me. You'll see. C'mon let's go.
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alan
I can't believe you! Why did you do this? You are a sick sonovabitch!
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richie
Relax. Relax. Listen, I know her and I know you. I didn't need to set anything up. I know you guys are meant for each other. Trust me. Just go up there and be yourself.
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alan
What!! You dragged my ass all the way down here shaking off pimps and hookers and you didn't set anything up? What's the matter with you?
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richie
Well she had no idea you were coming over. She doesn't know anything about you. But her name is Kari and she's a doll.
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alan
Ah no. Not exactly. What the fuck does that mean?
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richie
Ah no. Not exactly
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richie
Yeah. She's a real sweetheart.
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alan
Yes! Really? Yes!
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Alan breaks out in a huge smile and shoots out a small fist pump
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richie
OK. OK. She's was the one on the couch. In the middle.
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alan
Cut the shit Richie.
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richie
Well
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alan
Well maybe. Which one?
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richie
Ha. Ha. Now all of sudden you're interested
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alan
So which one is it?
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Alan and Richie head down the stairs into a finished basement
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Alan (CONT'D)
Oh yeah. What do ya got?
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Picking up on Richie's diversion to the basement
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alan
Huh?
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richie
Hey Alan, I've got something I want to show you in the basement.
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alan
Hello love!
(Embracing)
Are you all set for Chicago?
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Sherry
Alan!
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Richie comes back into the room with Sherry.
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Alan makes his way around to the other two woman and then steps to the end of the room and smiles. The conversation between the women picks up and he observes a bit detached.
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alan(inside his head)
OK. You're cute. But you're not number 2, number 2, number 2.
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alan
Hi.
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alan (inside his head)
Yes. Yes. Yes. Be you. Be you. Be you. If there's any justice in the world, BE YOU
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alan
And hello to you!
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alan (Inside his HEAD)
Oh God, hands like a linebacker. I hope not.
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Alan
Hello. How do you do? I'm Alan
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Alan steps up to the first woman. Reaches out his hand
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Richie leads Alan into the house. Richie steps away and Alan enters the living room where there are 5 woman seated. Three together on a couch and two in club chairs across the room. Unaware of which one is the intended target, Tony begins a dialogue in the room and in his head simultaneously.
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richie
You made it. Come on in. I'll go get Sherry.
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ALan
Richie my brother!
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richie
Alan!
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Alan rings front door bell. Waiting a beat, Richie comes to the door.
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Alan arrives at the Honeybrook address and parks in front of the house.
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Alan takes off on his mission to Honeybrook. The ride takes him through some very dicey neighborhoods. We will track the action picking up real people along the way. Street thugs, streetwalkers, kids etc. The ride is a long and Tony through his body language and expressions is showing real doubt about the mission.
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Alan get the address loaded and the nav tells him its 22 minutes away.
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alan (to himself)
Brentwood....Brentwood. Is that two words? Damn, Brentwood, Calif? What? Oh-jeez
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We find Alan trying to load his navigation system with the address. It doesn't seem to recognize the address.
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