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sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014. sharkpoint made 113 other changes.
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mikey
Ha. Ha. Now all of sudden you're interested
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Tony
What!! You dragged my ass all the way down here shaking off pimps and hookers and you didn't set anything up? What's the matter with you?
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tony
What!! You dragged my ass all the way down here shaking off pimps and hookers and you didn't set anything up? What's the matter with you?
sharkpoint deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
What!! You dragged my ass all the way down here shaking off pimps and hookers and you didn't set anything up? What's the matter with you?
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Tony
What? Are you kidding? What the fuck is the matter with you?
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MIkey
Ah no. Not exactly
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mikey
Would you just relax! It's going to be great. Trust me. You'll see. C'mon let's go.
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Mikey starts back of the stairs leaving Tony in the basement.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
mikey
Would you just relax! It's going to be great. Trust me. You'll see.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
I can't believe you! Why did you do this? You are a sick sonovabitch!
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tony
I can't believe you! Why did you do this? You know I'm beaten up right now.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
What!! You dragged my ass all the way down here shaking off pimps and hookers and you didn't set anything up? What's the matter with you?
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
I can't believe you! Why did you do this? You know I'm just beaten up
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Mikey
Well she had no idea you were coming over. She doesn't know anything about you. But her name is Kari and she's a doll.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
Mikey
Well she had no idea you were coming over. She doesn't know anything about you.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
Ah no. Not exactly. What the fuck does that mean?
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tony
I can't believe you! You know how
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mikey
Relax. Relax. Listen, I know her and I know you. I didn't need to set anything up. I know you guys are meant for each other. Trust me. Just go up there and be yourself.
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Mikey
Oh well she had no idea you were coming over. She doesn't know anything about you.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
Ah not exactly. What the fuck does that mean?
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/02/2014 [view]
tony
So you told her all about me. You showed her my picture? She was all cool with meeting me?
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mikey
Yeah. She's a real sweetheart.
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tonY
Yes! Really? Yes!
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Tony breaks out in a huge smile and shoots out a small fist pump
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Mikey
OK. OK. She's was the one on the couch. In the middle.
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tony
Cut the shit Mikey.
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mikey
Well
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tony
Well maybe. Which one?
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Ha. Ha. Now all of a sudden you're interested.
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tony
So which one is it?
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Tony and Mikey head down the stairs into a finished basement
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INT. night interior basement
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INT. Night interior house living room
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tony
Oh yeah. What do ya got?
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Picking up on Mike's diversion to the basement
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tony
Huh?
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Mike
Hey Tony, I've got something I want to show you in the basement.
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sherry
Oh we are gonna so miss you guys!
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tony
Hello love!
(Embracing)
Are you all set for Chicago?
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Sherry
Tony!
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Mikey comes back into the room with Sherry.
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Tony makes his way around to the other two woman and then steps to the end of the room and smiles. The conversation between the women picks up and he observes a bit detached.
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TONY (inside his head)
OK. You're cute. But you're not number 2, number 2, number 2.
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Tony
Hi.
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To the third woman
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tony (inside his head)
Yes. Yes. Yes. Be you. Be you. Be you. If there's any justice in the world, BE YOU
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Tony
And hello to you!
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To the second woman. Clearly a hottie
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