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sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014. sharkpoint made 48 other changes.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
kari
Are you coming by tomorrow?
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richie
You might as well kill it, we're not taking the bar to Chicago.
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Alan pours the two shots and brings them over to Kari who is still seated on the couch. They clink glasses and down the shots. Kari smiles and hands her empty glass back to Alan, but then looks away and starts talking to Number 3.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
kari
Are you coming by tomorrow
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Alan pours the two shots and brings them over to Kari who is still seated on the couch. They clink glasses and down the shots. Kari smiles and hands her empty glass back to Alan, but then looks away and starts talking to Sherry.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
(hesitant)
Ah....okay
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
kari
Yes I'd like a shot. And make one for yourself.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
I did. They invited me on stage at their last show. It went viral.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan (in his head)
This is great. They're a running catalogue of my life. But what's with this Kari?
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
(hesitant)
Yes ma'am
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alan
Anyone? Sherry, Richie?
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
(hesitant)
Yes maam
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
kari
Yeah a shot. And make one for yourself.
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alan (In his head)
Yeah, me too-this is painful
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alan
(hesitant)
Okay.
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kari
Yeah. And make a shot for yourself too.
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alan
Ah....yeah there is. Do you want?
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alan (In his head)
Yeah, me too
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kari
Neat. Join me in a shot?
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
Ah....yeah. How do you take it?
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kari
Is there any Jamison?
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alan
Anyone?
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alan (In his head)
Yeah, me
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Number 1
I'm okay. I have to be going in a couple minutes.
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alan
Anyone need a drink?
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Alan trying to move the conversation off himself moves to the other side of the room and grabs another beer.
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richie
No shit. Nice to see one of our boys make it hot.
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richie
Oh yeah, I saw that! I meant to ask you how Billy has been doing since they got crazy hot.
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alan
He's stretched man. Really focused but all over the map. Long way from Dobbs on Sunday nites.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
richie
Oh yeah, I saw that! I meant to ask you how Billy has been doing since they went crazy hot.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan (in his head)
This is great. They're a running catalogue of my life. But man this Kari seems like a tough nut to crack though.
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We focus on Kari who looks about as interested in the conversation as someone getting life insurance.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
richie
Oh yeah, I saw that! I meant to ask you about those guys.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
I did. They invited me on stage at their last show here and it went viral on Youtube.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan (in his head)
This is great. They're a running catalogue of my life. Man this Kari seems like a tough nut to crack though.
sharkpoint edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
number 1
Well I think that's great. Didn't you also sing with The Secret Kids?
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alan
Oh ho, we have a comedienne in our midst. Yes I host the parade on TV. It was for the Breast Cancer Walk-a-Thon.
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number 1
Well I think that's great. You know my aunt had C.
sharkpoint added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/04/2014 [view]
alan
Oh ho, another comediane in our midst. Yes I host the parade on TV. It was for the Breast Cancer Walk-a-Thon.
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Kari
(sarcastically)
Gay pride?!
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Number 1
Parade? What parade?
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number 3
I told you so! He's the guy that did that did the parade!
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Alan
Yeah, every now and then. I do some stand-up and emceeing around town
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number 1
Haven't I seen you on TV?
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Alan figuring he's come this far so he decides he'll turn on the charm and see what happens with Kari. His advances seem to be working on Numbers 1 and 3, but Kari seems disinterested. Alan returns to the living and is standing off to the side.
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Alan figuring he's come this far so he decides he'll turn on the charm and see what happens with Number 2. His advances seem to be working on Numbers 1 and 3, but Number 2 seems disinterested.
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Alan figuring he's come this far figures he'll turn on the charm and see what happens with Number 2. His advances seem to be working on Numbers 1 and 3, but Number 2 seems disinterested.
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